Again, your writing ceases to amaze me Saf Dawnheart; it's not every day you see one of the most childish legendaries acting so mature, it was really nice. And about your ending comment, I just now realized that...you do make the male legendaries slightly dense in your stories; but I'm not sure if you should really change that. It sort of give them character in their own aspect.

Aw...

This is so perfect! It's a fanfic with my most favorite couples in it! I hope you write another one like this!:)

-Black Rabbit-Chan-

There was nothing Azelf and the Legendaries could do to save Mesprit and Uxie!

Azelf made it out alive and that's good, plus with Mew Comforting him!

Well done on the story!

Haha, well, maybe you should make a totally smart guy that actually doesn't get it, like a guy who is all philosophical but doesn't understand many things, ya know? Like...Mewtwo! Yeah, make a smart-but-not-really Mewtwo story! That should make up for the other idiotic-male-stories. :3

And by the way, this was very well written, awesome job! (thumbs-up) Of course, with you, I don't think I expected anything else! X3

Lots of dragon-y love (and thumbs, ohmigosh! DRAGONS WITH THUMBS?),

DL ('Dragon Lover')

Amazing Saf! Just simply amazing!

The character interactions were, of course, pure genius -nods- I love you portrayed Mew in this one! She's just pure awesomeness!

Poor Azelf! :O

And yes, I do also tend to make the guy legends a bit... yeah xD

SH

That was absolutely touching...

I loved Mew in this, she's sweet yet tough about her points at the same time. Awesome job! :D

Yeah, I do that to. My guys tend to be idiots and my girls tend to be the more competent. ' I gotta stop that...

I loved the story. It was good and angsty and reminded me of another story a lot like this one that was terrific as well. Hmm, maybe I should give this type of story a try in the future?

Again, a fantastic story!

Attila

Squee! 8D

Awesomeness! Pure awesomeness! Yet again the emotions were perfect, and the situation fit it all well. Poor Uxie and Azelf. Urgh, I love Team Galactic, but at times I hate them too. T.T

Anyway, awesome job on this. At least Azelf's willing to continue on for his counterparts! :D