That was just...weird. I don't like Relena, but I can't imagine Heero killing her for no reason. I can imagine her pulling a gun on her and shooting her(I wish) But not that. It's so...unheeroish. lol. The writing was good, but it was a little too OOC, if you want to kill relena off you've really gotta have a bit more leading up to it...

Err... this fic doesn't make sense at all... Heero acted so OOC just to plot to kill Relena? That's so unlikely of him. And Relena fell for it? Come on, if you want to write an anti-Relena fic, at least try to write one with everyone IN character. I mean, Wufei didn't know Relena personally, but he was calling her a witch? Dunno, I got so confused throughout the whole fic. Ah well, hope your next fic will be better.

The ending was too predictable.

that was the stupidest thing i have ever come across even from a Relena hater. there should have been warnings on this for death and abuse.

interesting story, had a nice twist of events

Brenda

huh? heero would NEVER DO THAT! it was good i liked the writting.. but the plot didnt make sense.. are there more chapters coming? if that was it.. then im lost..lolz

Hilarious,

Absolutely hilarious, it truely was..meant to be -

Well, I must say, this certainly was something new and different to read... a little dark, but I thought it was cool - weird, but cool. I totally give you credit for being able to write something like this :)

ok i must say... it was awful... Herro would never do something like that and Relena would never fall for it...

God, that was sadistic...