ok i thort that was going to be good and then it just ... finished. a really lame ending. also. its a TROMBONE. not a trumpet *shakes head in disgrace*

It's been said before, but I'll say it again: You know that slidey instrument the he plays, or attempts to? It's called the Trombone. I'm pretty sure I know it's proper name because I happen to play one, for true. Please change it.

You have a good idea for this story, but instead of ' around what they're saying, you need to use ". We print these off the internet for our school assignment in english, which is to correct a fanfiction every monday and have it turned in. I thought that ur idea was so good that i'd actually write you a review because for the assignment we're supposed to do that anyway on the back of the paper and give a grade out of 20. You get an 18 ( the 2 pts are for the sentence structure)

Hey! good story. very cute

First of all.. he played the trombone to get her attention, but this is your fanfic and I should respect your wishes. You could have gotten a little more creative, but I did enjoy this despite your lack of detail.

Aws... that's so sweet!

cute, just like i remembered it from the movie

*lol* The instrument Jim is playing is a trombone, not a trumpet. Just thought you should know.

Aw. That was sweet! About as sweet as you can get, if it's gotta do with American Pie...KEEP WRITING!

Thats awesome, I think you shouldve written more and not taken so much from the actual movie but its all good.

cool

extrdenary (sorry spellings a little off in grade 8)didn't you partileily(again)

AW! I just have one thing to say. (other than this was really sweet and made me get all foggy eyed). to quote Michelle form the first movie: "SAY MY NAME!" LoL these movies are great, and you did a really good job!

BAND GEEKS FOREVER! (I'm not even in band, but my frineds are!)

Be GrEaSeRy!

Two Fingerz All,

*Rockabye* AKA Heaven Marquin

it was a trombone

Awwwwwwww! So cute... I loved it you should really write more... wow i was wicked...