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srstatts
2009-12-03 . chapter 2
great story!
cant wait 4 the next chapter
secret25
2009-11-29 . chapter 2
This is great! I loved it from the start and I know I'll love it to the end! So please update it's been like 3 months!

BTW you said that this will be a yaoi. That is great! I don't want Ryoma with Sakuno! I actually thought you would just make it a family thing but it's a added bonus to have yaoi neh? Well I think it would be good pairing if it were Fuji and Ryo since they get along so well already I like them together too! And I like TezuXryo too but isn't that a little bit more challenging since you made them bros? But either way I know I'll love the pairing you choose since well I like Yukimura and Atobe for Ryo too! lol

Anyway please update soon! Love it!

secret25
BonbonJovi
2009-11-29 . chapter 2
wai...

i know it's been a long time since you updated this story, but i sincerely hope you continue this because the story is so god!

kinu and ryo-chan are a bit ooc, but not much... they're actually very cute... you've done a very good job of describing their close relationship and their family's relationship with others (fuji and echizen family... ^.^)

thanks for a great read!
Explodium
2009-11-19 . chapter 2
lol... funny... i like the way you put the family connections and stuff very interesting story.. hope u update soon
Xien_Rue
2009-11-14 . chapter 2
THIS IS A GREAT STORY!
Ryoma and Tezuka as brothers is cute and lovely.
I loved to see Tezuka soft side for Ryoma.
For romance, I feel fine that there will be no Sakuna-Ryoma pairing. The original story don't have love story in big portion after all.
Finally, UPDATE PLEASE!^-^
not-.-ing
2009-10-18 . chapter 1
I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. Tezuka/Ryoma is actually one of my pairings but they do well as brothers too. They're both in character for the circumstances and even if they aren't, it just fits. Ryoma is, as always a brat, yet oddly perceptive at the same time and I totally adore him and Tezuka's brother complex. Their relationship is great and I love the humour.
Even though I do like a good Fuji/Ryoma, I don't think it fits with the story. Fuji seems like another older brother or perhaps accomplice in what their twisted minds come up with so maybe Ryo-chan could go with Yukimura or someone else (I would suggest Atobe because Atobe/Ryoma are my favourite pairing for PoT but since he's going with Tezuka which cuts off both of them, it's like aghh ^_^.)
This seems really long for such a short story but I'm really long-winded sorry and hope you update soon. I like your other stories as well, you're a great writer.
dontchafeel likedancing
2009-10-14 . chapter 2
omg this story is like SOO cute! i really love em being brothers you know? and theyre so alike and everything (: please keep writting it! its going to end up as an awesome fic ;) i just know it
what the gaaah
2009-10-14 . chapter 2
This story is SOO good! Tezuka modeling himself after Uchiha Itachi...*laugh* Hope you update soon!
Tsuki of the Roselight
2009-10-11 . chapter 2
Totally awesome story! If there's going to be pairings, I hope Ryoma's with Tezuka. I don't care if they're brothers. I love that pairing. The story is really interesting and original. Great job!
Omgoth
2009-10-09 . chapter 2
KAWAII! please, please, PLEASE, update soon. I am DYING to find out what happens in the tournament to become a regular.
Shibuya Kazuya
2009-10-07 . chapter 2
i love it please continue
Dementra
2009-09-27 . chapter 2
Love it so far, I hope you'd update soon
Lasa
2009-09-20 . chapter 2
Lol, I came upon this fic by accident while searching people's favorites. And I was like "Whoa, she updated this!" Love love love this story and can't wait for more.
Lolita-mist
2009-09-12 . chapter 2
Seriously! Dancing with a bear? and a crush? what else will Ryoma come up with to torment his brother??

I love it! So please do update soon ok? I love a long read and adore the way you structure your story line... can't wait to see how ryoma will do faced up with the regulars!
Lynn
2009-09-10 . chapter 2
I'm glad to see that you are continuing this storyline. I like how you write the interaction between the two as brothers.

Regarding pairing--I can't see Ryoma with Fuuji or Seiji; How about Sanada? (makes me think of the manga; Ryoma meets Sanada by fainting in his arms after defeating Kirihara in a match) But I like Tezuka/Atobe!

Looking foward to seeing more.

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