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Xien_Rue
2009-11-14 . chapter 2
THIS IS A GREAT STORY!
Ryoma and Tezuka as brothers is cute and lovely.
I loved to see Tezuka soft side for Ryoma.
For romance, I feel fine that there will be no Sakuna-Ryoma pairing. The original story don't have love story in big portion after all.
Finally, UPDATE PLEASE!^-^
not-.-ing
2009-10-18 . chapter 1
I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. Tezuka/Ryoma is actually one of my pairings but they do well as brothers too. They're both in character for the circumstances and even if they aren't, it just fits. Ryoma is, as always a brat, yet oddly perceptive at the same time and I totally adore him and Tezuka's brother complex. Their relationship is great and I love the humour.
Even though I do like a good Fuji/Ryoma, I don't think it fits with the story. Fuji seems like another older brother or perhaps accomplice in what their twisted minds come up with so maybe Ryo-chan could go with Yukimura or someone else (I would suggest Atobe because Atobe/Ryoma are my favourite pairing for PoT but since he's going with Tezuka which cuts off both of them, it's like aghh ^_^.)
This seems really long for such a short story but I'm really long-winded sorry and hope you update soon. I like your other stories as well, you're a great writer.
dontchafeel likedancing
2009-10-14 . chapter 2
omg this story is like SOO cute! i really love em being brothers you know? and theyre so alike and everything (: please keep writting it! its going to end up as an awesome fic ;) i just know it
what the gaaah
2009-10-14 . chapter 2
This story is SOO good! Tezuka modeling himself after Uchiha Itachi...*laugh* Hope you update soon!
Tsuki of the Roselight
2009-10-11 . chapter 2
Totally awesome story! If there's going to be pairings, I hope Ryoma's with Tezuka. I don't care if they're brothers. I love that pairing. The story is really interesting and original. Great job!
Omgoth
2009-10-09 . chapter 2
KAWAII! please, please, PLEASE, update soon. I am DYING to find out what happens in the tournament to become a regular.
Shibuya Kazuya
2009-10-07 . chapter 2
i love it please continue
Dementra
2009-09-27 . chapter 2
Love it so far, I hope you'd update soon
Lasa
2009-09-20 . chapter 2
Lol, I came upon this fic by accident while searching people's favorites. And I was like "Whoa, she updated this!" Love love love this story and can't wait for more.
Lolita-mist
2009-09-12 . chapter 2
Seriously! Dancing with a bear? and a crush? what else will Ryoma come up with to torment his brother??

I love it! So please do update soon ok? I love a long read and adore the way you structure your story line... can't wait to see how ryoma will do faced up with the regulars!
Lynn
2009-09-10 . chapter 2
I'm glad to see that you are continuing this storyline. I like how you write the interaction between the two as brothers.

Regarding pairing--I can't see Ryoma with Fuuji or Seiji; How about Sanada? (makes me think of the manga; Ryoma meets Sanada by fainting in his arms after defeating Kirihara in a match) But I like Tezuka/Atobe!

Looking foward to seeing more.

LST
chaos queen0703
2009-09-09 . chapter 2
Oh my god! I love your story
Please please please keep writing!
Updat soon
The Yaoi Mistress
2009-09-03 . chapter 2
OMG! i was waiting for a new chapter of these one XD and I vote for fuji for ryoma's boyfriend XD, i wait for the next chapter and make kuni-chan the uke with atobe XD

sorry im just full in sugar. update soon!

see you
strawrawbeby
2009-09-03 . chapter 2
nice! I love Ryo and Kunimitsu relationship.

I'm for Yukimura/Ryoma. There are not enough fanfic with this pairing. Also Yuki is more similar to Kuni which Ryoma would feel safe with and I think Kuni would be much happier too :) Fuji and Ryo have more of a brotherly relationship and they would cause too much trouble.

hope the updates will come faster now. if you ever loose inspiration, I could help you find it again.
nicki-gurl
2009-09-02 . chapter 2
I'm happy you decided to continue this story... I love it!

The cahnge of the Echizens as mere relatives rather than the immediate family intrigued me... I wonder if its going to play a big role in this story... As for Ryoma and Tezuka... they do show a case of brother-complex, Tezuka more so than Ryoma... got me wondering somehow about the possibilities... hehehe...

As for the pairing go with Tezuka and Atobe, then try to create a love triangle between Ryoma, Fuji and Yukimura, with Fuji winning in the end. It's curious how Tezuka would react to having his baby brother going out with the Seigaku sadist (albeit his close friend). Atobe being with Tezuka would clearly put Ryoma in a protective mode, and it's interesting to have Tezuka choose someone who resembles his brother a lot (brother complex again...)

Hope to see the next chapter soon!
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