Was worth reading. Fantastic story with a litte excitement for everyone, Rodney saves the day again. Fav character

Hm... Interesting story, but as usual Rodney get WHUMPHED! I think you went a little to harsh on him but your prerogative

KEEP IT UP!:)

Totally creepy! LOVE it! Excellent Rodney whumping :)

cool story, it was really good... i liked the ending a lot. :)

Wonderful, beautiful ending. I really enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for writing it. :)

awesome :D can't wait for more

how are they going to stop her?

Wow! Illysia is quite a formidable foe. I am intrigued by the thought that perhaps she does not want to be torturing others as you wrote that she had sadness for what she was doing. I wonder what kind of pain she is in as well. Nicely done.

Exciting!

Cool story - on the edge of my seat now! Keep it up :-).

ok i LOVE a good rodney whump but you cant leave it there! i cant wait till tomorrow! anychance of a sneak preview via email? kaia 1479

This is quite an exciting read and I look forward to more. :)

Thanks! i like having the team involved! :)

Great story... though i'm hopinh to see more of the characters.

Really liking this story! Looking forward to the next chapter.