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MaeKitt
2009-11-09 . chapter 2
Hey!

This story is turning out to be really intresting, but badminton is the closest sport to tennis, I think. lol

~ MaeKitt
J Luc Pitard
2009-05-08 . chapter 2
Fun! One thought, even with tennis being his life, I think Ryoma's played a little b-ball. PE in America, after all...

I love the concept and the idea of a non-tennis friendship forming. Your OCs ring true.

Looking forward to more!
moi
2009-03-10 . chapter 2
very interesting. its very difficult to find good stories in POT fandom i think. but this hits the mark. Good characterisation and interaction, though i doubt if Ryoma is really as bratty as you have written seeing how he always 'save' the days and usually have more tact i believe. i like how its one year onward, would be interesting to see how the other regulars will debut. i rarely like OCs but your OC is quite good, bratty and immature, not overly perfect. i can't wait to read the next chapter. good work.
PynkPlayar
2009-03-03 . chapter 2
Yay, I like this Ryoma-centric piece! Your very good at characterization and I can really emphasize how he feels. Coolio, keep writing! I look forward to it!
buMbL3b33
2009-02-01 . chapter 1
..kawaii ne..!!..plz update soon..!!..i like the way SAKUNO thought that she was the reason kuyo tripped..!!..that was so SAKUNO..!!..^^,
Miyuki Meiru
2009-01-31 . chapter 2
Lol this is so good! Please update!
asobi seksu
2009-01-31 . chapter 2
Smells like teen spirit! Yeah! XD

Ryoma is so-o-o-o boring. And I like this fic. Please continue~
Khelc-sul Renai
2009-01-31 . chapter 2
Basketball? Does Ryoma even have the slightest clue how to play basketball? ...At least they chose something they have an equal lack of knowledge about...

Well written.
afallenheart
2009-01-30 . chapter 2
Please update as soon as possible! PLEASE!
Kuroi Kuu
2009-01-30 . chapter 2
this sure is interesting.
its amusing to see ryoma out of his tennis world.

-kuroi-
Tressa
2009-01-30 . chapter 2
Ah, Ryoma. Poor, poor boy. Or should I feel sorry for Daisuke. Another very entertaining chapter. Loved the little bit about Tezuka coming back. It'll be interesting to see what happens. I'm very much looking forward to see what they do with their paper as well. Anxiously waiting for the next chapter!
Cinpii
2009-01-30 . chapter 1
It's interesting and different. I'm looking forward to how you develop this. It's fun seeing someone upset w/ Ryoma, instead of pandering to him.

I love friendship fics that don't force on the romance. A fic can be good and not need it (although if you sneak in some RyoSaku, I won't complain).

Found your stuff via the RLSP forum. Thanks for posting there. I'm including this in my C2. Maybe that will bring more readers and give you more inspiration to continue this. =)
Miyo-chan02
2009-01-21 . chapter 1
I definitely agree with the two reviews below mine. I'll be waiting for the next chapter as well
moi
2008-09-19 . chapter 1
it is quite an interesting idea to explore ryoma's personality without the tennis factor. i can't wait to read the next chapter.
Tressa
2008-09-18 . chapter 1
Very interesting. Because the series is, well, about tennis, we always see him interacting with the other club members but not anyone else. I'm very interested to see where you'll take this.

I'm very intrigued by what you have it. It's different from what we've been seeing lately and I love this story for that. You write very well, descriptive enough to see what's happening and also to keep it flowing, but it's not overly descriptive as well. Characterizations are wonderful. Poor Ryoma. Again, I'm very interested to see where you're taking this. Looking forward to more!
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