 MaeKitt 2009-11-09 . chapter 2Hey!
This story is turning out to be really intresting, but badminton is the closest sport to tennis, I think. lol
~ MaeKitt |
 J Luc Pitard 2009-05-08 . chapter 2Fun! One thought, even with tennis being his life, I think Ryoma's played a little b-ball. PE in America, after all...
I love the concept and the idea of a non-tennis friendship forming. Your OCs ring true.
Looking forward to more! |
 moi 2009-03-10 . chapter 2 very interesting. its very difficult to find good stories in POT fandom i think. but this hits the mark. Good characterisation and interaction, though i doubt if Ryoma is really as bratty as you have written seeing how he always 'save' the days and usually have more tact i believe. i like how its one year onward, would be interesting to see how the other regulars will debut. i rarely like OCs but your OC is quite good, bratty and immature, not overly perfect. i can't wait to read the next chapter. good work. |
 PynkPlayar 2009-03-03 . chapter 2Yay, I like this Ryoma-centric piece! Your very good at characterization and I can really emphasize how he feels. Coolio, keep writing! I look forward to it! |
 buMbL3b33 2009-02-01 . chapter 1..kawaii ne..!!..plz update soon..!!..i like the way SAKUNO thought that she was the reason kuyo tripped..!!..that was so SAKUNO..!!..^^, |
 Miyuki Meiru 2009-01-31 . chapter 2Lol this is so good! Please update! |
 asobi seksu 2009-01-31 . chapter 2Smells like teen spirit! Yeah! XD
Ryoma is so-o-o-o boring. And I like this fic. Please continue~ |
 Khelc-sul Renai 2009-01-31 . chapter 2Basketball? Does Ryoma even have the slightest clue how to play basketball? ...At least they chose something they have an equal lack of knowledge about...
Well written. |
 afallenheart 2009-01-30 . chapter 2Please update as soon as possible! PLEASE! |
 Kuroi Kuu 2009-01-30 . chapter 2this sure is interesting.
its amusing to see ryoma out of his tennis world.
-kuroi- |
 Tressa 2009-01-30 . chapter 2Ah, Ryoma. Poor, poor boy. Or should I feel sorry for Daisuke. Another very entertaining chapter. Loved the little bit about Tezuka coming back. It'll be interesting to see what happens. I'm very much looking forward to see what they do with their paper as well. Anxiously waiting for the next chapter! |
 Cinpii 2009-01-30 . chapter 1It's interesting and different. I'm looking forward to how you develop this. It's fun seeing someone upset w/ Ryoma, instead of pandering to him.
I love friendship fics that don't force on the romance. A fic can be good and not need it (although if you sneak in some RyoSaku, I won't complain).
Found your stuff via the RLSP forum. Thanks for posting there. I'm including this in my C2. Maybe that will bring more readers and give you more inspiration to continue this. =) |
 Miyo-chan02 2009-01-21 . chapter 1I definitely agree with the two reviews below mine. I'll be waiting for the next chapter as well |
 moi 2008-09-19 . chapter 1 it is quite an interesting idea to explore ryoma's personality without the tennis factor. i can't wait to read the next chapter. |
 Tressa 2008-09-18 . chapter 1Very interesting. Because the series is, well, about tennis, we always see him interacting with the other club members but not anyone else. I'm very interested to see where you'll take this.
I'm very intrigued by what you have it. It's different from what we've been seeing lately and I love this story for that. You write very well, descriptive enough to see what's happening and also to keep it flowing, but it's not overly descriptive as well. Characterizations are wonderful. Poor Ryoma. Again, I'm very interested to see where you're taking this. Looking forward to more! |