 SHuntress 2009-11-03 . chapter 10Enjoyed reading it :) |
 isabellapurri 2009-10-23 . chapter 10Poor Tony! It's always him, isn't it?
Another great, great work!
I love seeing Jenny. She was a field agent (Gibbs and Tony's style), with a sharp political mind. So not like Toothpick, who is McGee style with the political side (well, sort of). You wrote her really well, and I loved (it was so cool!) seeing her "asking" for the BlackHawk. Subtle. hauhsaush
I can't really imagine the pain Tony must've been through. But Palmer was there to save the day! My three favorite NCIS characters of all times, Tony, Palmer and McGee (in this order, mostly)... Palmer should've a bigger role, I think. Like you said in the reply of my other review, Palmer is a great comic relief (I will always remember one of Palmer's first scenes... He had a cold, and was in the shower, and the door bell rang, and he was late... haushaushaushaushuash), and I think he'll make a perfect Ducky for our Tony someday. =DD |
 dementor145 2009-10-14 . chapter 10Oh Thank you. This story is like in my hall of fame of favourites. XD
The characters stayed in character. (well save a few words that Gibbs said but for the most part good job.) I always find fanfic with decent character mannerism hard to find and you did a very good job.
Also those little scenes that give the shippers something to squee about. (Tiva and Mcabby? XD) You really are my hero.
And last but not least thank you again for letting the geeks be the hero. GEEKS RULE! |
 JustThinkHappyThoughts 2009-10-02 . chapter 10I did indeed enjoy reading it! :) I just read it all this evening, and I am impressed. As far as the plot is concerned; amazing. I liked the whole idea of it, and your medical knowledge was very well written. I am no doctor either, but I didn't see any problems with it!
And the I loved the Palmer and McGee hospital scene at the end. Where they made their confessions to Tony while he was unconcious! And the last scene - where else would Gibbs be?
Loved it,
x JustThinkHappyThoughts |
 Azamiko 2009-09-06 . chapter 10Very fun and cute! |
 mmmQuinn 2009-09-04 . chapter 10Very well written! Everything tied up in the end, with no loose strings of plot dangling:excellent first foray into writing fan fiction! I am looking forward to reading more of your work. |
 zats 2009-08-25 . chapter 10Found your story and loved the team dynamic and caring shown in the story. Makes me want to read more. Thanks. |
 Serenity Starke 2009-07-20 . chapter 1This story was excellent. Although predictable in some places (bridge washing out, helo's having to wait, etc.) it was still and excellent story. I think you did a very good job in getting down the characters personalities, except maybe Ziva, but I find a lot of people have a hard time getting really true with her. The story moved smoothly and was just right with descriptions while explaining Tony's condition.
Great job. |
 BnBfanatic 2009-07-17 . chapter 10That was one of the best NCIS stories I have ever read - and I have read a LOT. Your depiction of TOny deliriously talking about, or saying things to his Father were so in character - same with Gibbs and his thinking Tony was talking to him. You had excitement, drama and humor and pegged each character perfectly! Nice job! |
 stephie 23 2009-07-14 . chapter 10I have to say ... this has been the BEST NCIS story I have read to date! I think you got the characters spot on! I love your writing style as well, it's very concise, well versed, mature, ... brilliant! :) Hope to read more from you very soon!! |
 numbat000 2009-07-07 . chapter 10I really liked this story. I thought the character relationships worked really well and I thought you used Jimmy and McGee very well - not often that they are portrayed as the heroes. The humour was very good and the story was overall very suspenseful. Thank you. |
 USAFChief 2009-07-06 . chapter 10Very nicely done. I really enjoyed reading this story and will continue to read more of your work. You have a great deal of talent. Thank you very much for sharing it. |
 scryoko 2009-06-21 . chapter 10Oh wow, that was awesome. I loved it, loved every damn second of it. The suspense kept me at the edge of my seat, and all the medical terms and procedures left me damned impress. If you didn't mention that you didn't have any medical knowledge except for what you've gained knowledge of as a patient, I wouldn't have known the damned difference. Actually, I'm still kind of dubious in believing that because it all seemed so real. *grin*
Anyway, like mentioned, I absolutely loved this fic. I only wished that it was even longer so I could have read more. ^__^ |
 Arica, Princess of Rivendell 2009-06-20 . chapter 10Well done; very well done. |
 DreamerChild88 2009-05-29 . chapter 10Great job! I really liked this story. Palmer (and McGee) did an excellent job of removing Tony's appendix, especially with limited supplies and such. I think you did a great job of writing all of the characters. Keep writing! |