It wasn't terrible, but be a little more creative next time. And it was too short. Not really a flame, just constuctive criticisim.

I loved this. It gave me peace about Soubi and Ritsuka's relationship instead of making me feel all ansty. Awsome job!

I'm adding this story to my Story Alerts just incaseyou decide to update with another lovley oneshot.

Ah, I was thinking that, too, about Soubi catching it. :D good job, we need all the Soubi/Ritsuka (or is it Ritsuka/Soubi?) fics we can get.