Cool! What an unexpected pleasure to read! I absolutely loved it, I can't wait to read more :D Very original, good writing style, really good job ^^

Huggels, Tomorrows Dust

Oh, that is a nasty situation Xander's been put in. Was the woman who destroyed his life one of Dumbledore's minions? Will someone or something happen to break through the obliviate? Willow, Giles, et al. are *not* going to be happy when they find out that the Wizarding World has destroyed Xander in order to hide Harry Potter with him. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

I am blown away and I can't wait for more. Your descriptions of Alex's life with Evan, struggling under the memory curse are profound. The images you provide are so vivid: the silver cross, the shelving of books, Evan's twig like arms. I can't wait to read more. You write a very engrossing story. I wish there was more! Please continue to write. I have so many questions. Who was the woman? Where are the Scoobies? Can they reach Xander? Or is he missing to them, like how muggles miss the Leaky Cauldron. I loved the idea of "buffy" being the hero whether boy or girl and how Evan crawls into bed with Alex. I hope you keep it up. Brilliant!

Update soon please!!

Loving the twist and i really want to know the who and why in all of this! i have a few ideas but nothing solid!

Ok, now I'm -really- caught up in this. I want to see what happens when Willow and/or Giles finally find him. Keep it up!

Oh, I really like this story so far (:

It's very interesting!

Update soon?! (:

Seems like this'll become a pretty interesting story... Please don't leave Xander without his past for too long!

Ehem... Yeah...
Bye

D: I don't know what's happening yet and that makes me sad, but I'm sure it will get explained and I'm excited for that. :D

interesting start. can't wait to see the explaination.

This is a really good start! :)

Enough of a hook for me to want to turn the page, but don't know if I want to keep reading yet - there is not enough information yet. Please post more? Give us an idea of where you are actually headed with this?

Hey, this sounds pretty cool so far! I love crossovers and putting Xander in it is a neat idea. You write well too. Keep it up! :)