 anon 1/22/12 . chapter 1 Ah love
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 Miss Elizabeth Blakeney 11/17/10 . chapter 1I can't thank you enough for a most enjoyable and emotional read! Your characters feel as if they walked off the screen and right into your story. I can truly see Hogan acting exactly like that, lashing out then showing that true strength of character one loves in him.
You also did a great job of balancing emotional and matter of fact sections. It would have been easy for a story like this to become maudlin but you kept it dramatic without being overpowering.
...I always like to leave with something that could be improved on; I always appreciate those in my reviews...but I'm drawing a blank. A well rounded, well balanced, good spelling and punctuation, good characters...just keep up the good work! ;P |
 Kommandant Hogan 10/30/09 . chapter 1This is awesome!
I love it when Klink threatens to force-feed Colonel Hogan.
You are right about Shultz and the food. |
 Hammond's Girl 10/22/08 . chapter 1A friend told me to read this and I truly enjoyed it. A different approach than most authors take with our heroes. Very good job. |
 Jennaya 9/19/08 . chapter 1I throughly enjoyed the story and like the hope at the end. Hogan would have gone through all those emotions, very natural in the progression. |
 Mad Scientist too 9/19/08 . chapter 1This is a very good story. It would be easier to read if you posted the new material as a new chapter rather than adding it to the end of the old material and reposting the entire story. You would also probably get more readers that way as well. |