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sweet update

Seems that after your story I've got enough sweetness for a day or two, but nonetheless your story is great.

Based on your idea there could be a truly nice story warping through the years into adulthood. What began as a mooning-for-the-girl-next-door friendship settled into a true and innocent one sometime later. Well, maybe you're interested in expanding the story a bit :)

I know it's been like forever, but if you find the time...could you possibly update? I love this story...it gave me chills.

danngg..this story is soo good. Dude.. you should update. i love it

Your writing is absolutly incredible and I enjoyed every second of this story. I'm really hoping that you will update soon because quality work like that is hard to come by, and honestly, I'm hooked. It was one of the few stories I've read on this site that have real emotion and descriptions of the small, tender moments in a realationship, instead of just focusing on the smut. In a way, it was even more effective, because right now, I feel like I have to take a cold shower...lol. I would really appreciate your input on my stories, so if you have time read them over and tell me what you think. Great job.

Aw that was so good. That was amazing. I'm adding you to my favorite authors list.

This was so good. The detail was great. Since this story is so old compared to my review, I have a feeling that you won't write more, but I hope you do!

aww... how sweet. write more.

sorry, person who wrote this, but it is really not very good...um...you are a little too descriptive and unbelieveable for me...

PLEEZ WRITE MORE! TELL ME YOU'RE GOING TO WRITE MORE! I'M GONA DIE IF YOU DON'T WRITE MORE MORE MORE! :o)

You are continuing right? Please, tell me you are.

My God, this is incredible! I still can't fathom the beauty of your writing. You have to have gotten some sort of publishing deal! Your portrayals of Clark and Lana were uncanny! And i love your creating of the inevitable in the last few paragraphs (the drawing of the "S"; I can't quite remember if the literary term was foreshadow...but anyhoo, I think you know what I'm talking about.)

This is a wonderful, winderful story.

Cracker

wow that was amazing..the 's' thing was great. luved it and waiting for more!

This is one of the best Smallville fan fic on this site. Only prob. is that there isn't any new chapters. I'll understand if the story is over, but it has so much more potential left. You have to write more!Or at least start another one.