Marui Sakuno sitting on a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G hheheheh! Nice story love it!

there are a couple gramatic mistakes and you missed a couple words...)which i guess sorta goes in grammer xD...) but other than that not bad. (:

~Aishmish*

Hi ^_^

Lovely~ So the keyword is "Sweet" again XD That really makes sense of why Bunta and Sakuno must be together XD One is a lover of 'sweet' and the other is a master of 'sweet'

I must say that the second chapter is really better than the first one XD Improvement and congrats!!

Hope that you'll update soon~ Thanks for sharing~

Cheers,
mi-chan yori~

There are some grammar and spelling mistakes. I suggest you look through it again. However, it is nice to see a different pairing than the hundreds of RyoSaku fics out there.