I wish i cud have seen da picture. I MEAN! Funny story love it. The way fullmetal came rushing through the Cornal office he made it seem like it was him who was naked in da picture.

Hope their is a flash back to the poker game nite wit Maes and Roy, Mabe a lemon.

OHMYGOD, THE ENDING KILLS.

xDDDDDDDDDDD Wow, one of the best things I've ever read :33 Good job! I love how well you captured Maes's calming tone and Roy's different characters in front of Fullmetal and his best friend3

Ahahahah! Love it XD especially the ending! *falls off couch laughing*

I love this! Your description of Roy's picture is amazingly vivid. And I was wondering what Ed wanted... nice ending! :)

Oh ... my ... gosh. That last line-my jaw hurts from cracking up! *pokes author accusingly*

Your story Centrefold is really, really funny and well-done. I needed to tell you that before I went on with my day. :)

Keep writing,

Winnie

That was hilarious! Poor Ed is so puzzled - if something is outside his alchemic studies, he really doesn't have much going for him, does he? And Roy and Maes' exchange in the hall was amusing beyond words.

This was Fantastic!

Thanks for Writting it.

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one of the funniest M-Raters I've read in a long time. I love Maes! He's hilarious. And Ed's last line? That one had me rofling like a loon for quite a while...

Anyways, good work! Keep it up.

Hahaha... Poor Roy. But the picture would have been really sexy. I want a copy of that! :P

Hm... I wonder why Ed would want the magazine back. ;)

Nicely written.

Love, Niki

LOL! That was awesome. :D

BAD BAD ED!NAUGHTY BOY!..he deserves some spanking's...*evil grin* get'em pony!/Roy!...I loved the lemon, it was great..I so wish that this happened in the manga..it would make me watch the series,particularly the one episode.

I adore the fact Ed wanted the Magazine back

xDD

Too awesome, that was so funny and the last line just finished it perfectly.

Well, I saw the eyecatching premise of the story and just had to click, entirely too tempting not to.

I have to say that I love it, all of my favorite things rolled into one.

Hilarious and tastefully so, sexy and visually pleasing with perfect descriptions, everyone exactly in character, hinting to intercourse and keeping it in line with the description of the photo in question as well. Even the ending line floored me, as there are so many one-liners to pick from.

Actually, loads of things I like about this and too many to probably mention, so I loved it and am going to add it to my favorites. Good job.

HILARIOUS story. Loved it. Going straight to my favourites.