Excellent, I must say I may not have liked you very much at first, because you flamed me and stuff, but when a story is good it deserves to be recognized even if you despise the author as a person. You were right, I was wrong. It was a piece of junk, it has been removed. I plan on rewriting it, without songs, quotes, or whatever other unnessesary balderdash I stuck in there. Anyway to the review. This was a brilliant one shot. Usually I'm not into this fandom (Not that I don't like it just not familier), but you did a brilliant job.


To the person who reviewed before me: I see nothing in this story that needs to be reported, and just because you may have been reported for yours does not mean you can send a false report, just because someone flamed you.

love the story!
To bad there gonna take
it down.You see,people dont
waste there time reading JB fics,what you may ask?
If it wasnt for JB stories,this site
would be nothing.

Also,your story,REPORTEDx10

Sweeney Todd's real name was Benjamin Barker, not Parker. Other than that small, miniscule detail, the story was great! I found it hilarious! Good work!

Oh wow. This was great. D:

Fav line: “Fine! But when I’m old and gray and living as a hermit in the deserts of Tatooine, my hermit name is going to be Ben!” - That's amazing. I love it!

I didn't have any concrit to point out except just go over and revise it again, y'know ... I think the sentence fluency could use a little work. But other than that, I liked it.

Ashe

Nice story. I liked how you tied the Ben thing in with the orginal Star Wars and it was Obi-wan's psudonym. Nice job.