I dont get it? was Jonathan the purple light? did he catch her? is he dead? are they stuck in midnight? i need answers...u need to update;p

plz continue i never was satidfied by the ending, this looks realy interesting and has potential. plz hurry up and update! lol

I would appriciate it if you would update your story. I like this ending better than the original, so far. Johnthan and Jessica belong together!

WAT HAPPENS??!!

can't wait for the next chapter!
cheers :)
janee

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Awesome! I'm liking this, it almost feels like I'm reading the actual book! I loved the line "swallowing the sun"--your descriptions are awesome. :)

Update soon! =D

Wow this is going to be really good i can tell. Please finish i want to keep reding!

That was really good.
KEEP WRITING PLEASE!! I need to read about Rex and Melissa. Their my fave =D
But the whole jonathon/jessica thing was donme really well, even though I don't like Jessica

Very interesting concept; so did Jonathan keep Jessica in normal time? Did Jonathan die? Did Jessica fall off the roof? Many questions left unanswered.

I liked the part from Jonathan's point of view better than the part from Jessica's point of view; I like the dialogue between them...very in character. But I just love this sentence: "It was like swallowing a sun." Actually very Scott Westerfeld-like, if you know what I mean. Sounds like something we would write.

Great story, hope to see more.

wens the next comin out?? i like it its good

Your story is AMAZING! :) Please keep writing!

Can you check out my story, and maybe review please? My friend and I are competing for who has the most reviews! Will you please help me out? I’m losing! :( I just updated it and I need advice!

Thank you! :)
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Woah, cool ending! I must admit that I like this a lot better than the real ending. What a wonderful way of writing, that just draws you in. I really hope you continue this, I look forward to reading the next chapter.

Aw awsomeness! Please continue! I wil totally read it! Its so spiff!