please do more fanfic. Post a chapter if you have read this.

ok, that chapter wuz awesome! I love romance stuff, so that part was cool, and Hitorigami reminds me of someone I knew at school before Summer Break. Anyway, that was a really great chapter.

hehe...I LOVED the kissing! (I'm a sucker for romance) And now I REEAALLY want to read more. This is getting epic!

A little bit above 70,0 words? :P Join the 100k club with me! XD ...And Ninetails? 8D Ilu.

"Lee magically took his sword out, making pretty sparkles fly from his hands. I made a mental note to try to figure out how in the heck he made the pretty sparkles fly." Hehe- he REALLY gets distracted easily...but that makes it more interesting.
Anyway, hope your writer's block clears soon- this is a really awesome story.
Adios

this story is 2 times funnier than anything i've read so far as funny as the game even. keep up the amazing work

...Cool!

Ha! I knew he was her brother. I knew it I knew it I knew it I knew it!

3,228,656,342 yen? That is a lot. (Why'd ya write it out?)
First Susano, then Gin, then Rosco- I feel kinda bad for the group. And yet, I must laugh at their misfortune.
It woulda been even funnier if Dravis stayed!
As usual great job with the story.
:P
!Adios!

I Lol'd A LOT! So much I scared my parents!

The pen thing kinda reminds me of the book series Percy Jackson and The Olympians- his pen's a weopon...
Susano *shudder* is weird, and sounds kinda really hyper. :P
Update son!

["The Dakls. The Demons Against King Lee Society. You know? Dakls is so much shorter."

"That's stupid," Larka stated.

I pouted at her. She never accepted my ideas, even when they were good ideas. And calling it Dakls was so much shorter than the D. A. K. L. S. Honestly... poopy head.

Wow, I'm immature.]

XD Sounds exactly like someone arguing with themself.

Just curious, how long do you think this fic is gonna be? :)

Pretty cool so far. I 'specially like the sarcastic narrator. Humor makes everything more interesting.
Anywho, can't wait to see where this goes. :P

Much better! -hug- And happy birthday, too. You're getting much better at description and grammar now. :) And I love the last line.

You've improved a lot from your last random fic, but I have one complaint--the dialogue. I think we need a little bit more show than tell. ^^;