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Ony
2009-11-11 . chapter 8
I like this one! I wish you'd made a story out of it, it really has potential. Don't suppose you'd pick it up again?
I like SakuIno, I don't really see enough of it. It's great to have Sasuke and Sakura (and Ino) being friends, too. The bathroom scene was excellent. You're very good at friendly, flirtatious banter.
The casual touching between Sasuke and Naruto is what's doing it for me the most here. I like that a lot.
Animeaddict666
2009-10-10 . chapter 8
AH GADS! This was like being at a fancy party and not getting to eat as much of the appetizers as you want cause all the other stuffy people aren't eating them!

I LOVED IT AND I DEMAND MORE THIS INSTANT.

Pretty please.

Really, I love the dialog between all parties, and how you characterized Sakura and Sasuke. I just dig it when people make my favorite characters feel real but NEW. Just so enjoyable.
Breseis25
2009-10-10 . chapter 10
Oh my goodness... That last one, Eyes on Fire, my god! I was left speechless because one, I love Blue Foundation, and the story, no matter how short it is, is absolutely bloody perfect. I absolutely told my best mate about it, and she loved it also. I mean wow, I got shivers and giggled it was so good. Whoa... Just whoa. Jesus christ whoa. Amazing! Even though I'm typing so much I don't feel like i'm giving proper justice, let alone expressing how much I love it suitably. Beautiful work, absolutely stunning.
-Breseis
sakurananachan
2009-10-10 . chapter 9
Again, read it on LJ and again is the same feeling... It makes me wonder so many thing about them... You did warn people about these things never having an end... it stills makes me sad... knowing I'll never know
sakurananachan
2009-10-10 . chapter 8
I remember reading this on LJ and loving it, it had fewer lines I do remember that and I loved every minute of it...
I must confess that I had not find it in me to come and read these small drabbles because I knew I was gonna get all upset about never knowing where was this going... Is almost as if you were giving me a tease of what a can't never have... actually is exactly that hehehe
m I'm pretty sure I was trying to make a point here, but totally forgot and got distracted by a text I received... so I guess the moment is gone, just like your moment to ever finish this... or who knows, maybe if I prau to the right gods - or demons - I might be able to see the end of this... doubtful I would say, but still one can only hope hehehe
Black-Sky-Loves-Me
2009-10-10 . chapter 10
Whoa 0_0 That was hott! Loved it ^_^
Black-Sky-Loves-Me
2009-10-10 . chapter 9
Hahaha oh wow... I love them ^_^
Black-Sky-Loves-Me
2009-10-10 . chapter 8
Aww ^_^ That was wonderful!
Rosa Lui
2009-10-09 . chapter 9
LOVED THIS! *hug*
narutonejii
2009-10-08 . chapter 7
BAY AREA! haha dyed hair xD cute
narutopsychologist
2009-04-12 . chapter 6
Oh C'mon? You can't leave this here! Please at least say what it's about? What are they filming in St.louis? Are they porn stars? Actors? Ah!
passionateartist
2009-01-22 . chapter 1
I really liked the merman idea. A shame you've stopped it.
MidnightFox
2008-09-22 . chapter 6
lol lol lol. I love real world and i loved this. oh! and In the Morning. def. that one too

2008-09-22 . chapter 7
I liked this also (surprise, surprise) but I agree that the whole Oro taking over Sasuke has lost its drama.

It was a bit har keeping up with the timejumps and if you hadn't explained it in the beginning I think it would have been even more difficult. Now it's hard saying anything at all about a story that isn't finished, I have no idea how the finished product would be. Knowing you it would probably have been great!

Thank you so much for your words and the fact that you write them down for us!
yumerin
2008-09-21 . chapter 6
I really don't know what "Real World" is, but I guess I understood the plot. Sort off.

"Sometimes, do you watch stuff on TV and go: GEE, THAT WOULD BE A GREAT SASUNARU FIC!!"

I know what you mean. People like us shouldn't watch movies. or read books.

We're hopeless /o\
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