Nice T/P i liked it. Would have liked a longer ending but whatevs

aw so sweat a little rushed but sweat it was good and i hope you rite a nather fan fic on trunks and pan you are prity good

p.s. sary if i spelt things rong i gust suk at speling

That was good i enjoyed so u should do some more like that Peace out!

You write wonderful fanfics, and I absolutely love this one. However, I would just like to let you know that the song "I will always love you" was written and originally sung by Dolly Parton. I'm just trying to help you give credit where credit is due. It is a great song though! Again, I love your work! T&P forever!

I loved the story! -crys- it was sad and happy at the same time! Very good story, and I just thougt Dende was the best of all!

Hmm you tricked us... i knew that was too good to be true

*cheers* Aww, Tany, you did a great job with this fic. It's going to be sad not seeing anything from you, so know you're going to be missed if you can truly stay away. *wink* You are a very good writer, so please don't let it go so freely. Regardless, be proud! You finished your fic! That's more than I can say... :) Congrats.
Loaf of Pan

i'm really glad u decided to finish the story before leaving the fandom, even though it took a while to finish. wish you the best of luck in whatever fics you write in the future

Cute ending, quite funny too!

THANK YOU. THANK YOU. THANK YOU. THANK YOU. THANK YOU. THANK YOU FOR THE ENDING. I'm so glad that you finally finished this, and that it was a happy ending. It's a shame that you will no longer write fic for DBZ. All the good writers are leaving. Darn shame too. You're such a talented writer and all. I mean look at me, I've waited years for you to finish this up. Ain't that telling you something? Oh well. I guess I'll have to scour around and find the next best thing. You will be missed. Sorry to see you go, but if it makes you feel better, I really enjoyed and loved this story. Great job. Laters.

I think I'm gonna cry. That's so sad. Update soon. I wanna know what happens between Trunks and Pan.

Wah!:(
It's sad,but I still like it!
Also,YOU BETTER HAVE TRUNKS AND PAN BE HAPPY NEXT CHAPTER OR ELSE!
-Liana
p.s.-write more please!_

WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE THIS! IT'S BEEN TWO BLEEPING YEARS! COME ON NOW. THIS HAS GOT TO BE A NEW RECORD. THE LONGEST A FANFIC WRITER TAKES TO UPDATE AWARD GOES TO TANYANEKO. GREAT STORY, BUT PLEASE FINISH IT,

i like it )

continue soon plz