This has been so long and labyrinthine, it's hard to remember it's taken place over so short a period of time . . .

All the various pieces are moving into position. I've a feeling the climax may take longer than the rest of the story!

So good! I love how everyone is making plans to save Kala!

Great Chapter!! I can't wait for the next chapter. I understand about wanting the chapter to be perfect before you post it. I'm the same way with my chapters. I refuse to post them before they are beta'd and that means slow updates for me.

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Mac

Yeah, Zod, you're lucky he didn't do worse, you jerk! I don't trust him! Please Kala, keep your guard up against him, please!

*Grandpa giant floating head*!! Love it! :D

Ha! Luthor has Lois' gun?! So with that little fact, I have a bad feeling Lois will be seeing that gun real soon!!

Oh, my, I really hope Lois doesn't have to choose between her two children. I wouldn't wish that on my worst enemy. Damn Luthor! *growls*

Excellent update!

Man, the tension in the house is palpable. Lois left without a word. Ok, I know she needs the space, but these two, I tell ya..!! I hate they're so at odds. You know I love my Clois.. *whimpers*!

Oh, boy, Jason will have his way, no matter what, with equal parts Lois and Clark inside of him. The boy can't help it!

I don't want to think about them flying together under the circumstances. They're going to have to talk in such close 'quarters' as it were!

Excellent update!!

I just read the entire story up to this point today. All 31 chapters in one day. And it's absolutely amazing. My heart pounds at the suspenseful points, my eyes well up when it's heartwarming or bittersweet, and I put off things like eating just so I could keep reading. So, obviously, keep up the incredible work. And there is no way I'll be able to wait two weeks.

Love it!

wonderful, I like the manipulation of Luthor. Zod seems like he is a decent guy, who just had a bad week. Not the villain we knew before; Kryptonian manipulation? Her Dad would fall for it as well.

I loved this chapter!! I can't wait for more!!

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Mac

Wow!
Another great Chapter!

Great chapter!
Love that Lana and Richard are going to follow secretly. All the wonderful possibilities there!
Yes! Jason sneaking into the shadows, too. And teens are totally unpredictable! Clark will really have his hands full trying to keep them all safe!
And Clark, can't wait to see what he and lois will talk about on the fly over!
Great stuff! Thanks!
P.S. I stumbled on to your videos on Youtube. Fabulous, lovely, inspiring all descriptions of your visions. Thanks!!

I don't know why I didn't see Jason's determination to help coming. I makes total sense. Thank you for the (Canadian) Thanksgiving treat.

Ladies, wonderful job on this chapter as always. I just kept thinking that Jason would blackmail Richard and Lana into letting him go with them. Afterall, all he had to say was, if they didn't let him go with them, then he would tell Clark and Lois. LOL Come on, isn't he that smart? Or would that just not work somehow?

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Mac

the goodbyes were so intense, but dramatic! please update soon!

This is SOME setup -- the denouement is going to be freakin' awesome!

I just look at all the personalities you have mixing in to this, and wonder what's going to happen next, when Lana and Richard are going to have to step in with L&C and how, and where Jason's going to sneak in and save the day. Will Elise find out who he REALLY is? Will Ben? Will Lois actually get to shoot Luthor through the eyesocket and can we watch?