Aw that is so sweet!! :)
10/10 Fabulous

Amazing! The best JE ending! 10.5/Donna...hm...it's...possible! I'm suprised at the names of Rose's twins! But oh well! Anyway, I think you are the only person who had me doubt my theory about 10.5 being...well...evil...just a little! And no I am not paraniod! But anyway I loved this! I had a look at some of the reviews and just ignore anybody who says 10.5/Donna isn't a good pairing! Considering he isn't completely the Doctor! Anyways, loved it! It's amazing! Just brilliant! Fantastic!

Yeah, I think you're pretty much the only one who's thought of paring 10.5 and Donna. Good idea, though. That was kind of funny at the end, though, with all their names. Cos, it's Cassandra, Reniette, and Nigel. ROTFL at that! Great story, though. Good job!

Really, you're gonna give us all Knock-Off Nigel's? ALRIGHT! I GET MY OWN CLONED SEXY BLUE SUITED DOCTOR! Haha! Anyways, I love this AU so far. One of the best JE Au's I've read. Now, I'm off to read more!

i liked this version much better

“And, of course, the lovely Rose Tyler, ruining the pattern with an ‘R’!”

XD

Hey! I loved it! Believe it or not, I even liked the 10.5/Donna before I read this, so I was thrilled to find it here. I didn't think anyone would have it and have been seriously ** when I am trying to find some quality 10/Rose, especially alternate Journey's Ends and I keep finding this 10.5/Rose crap! You should write a sequel to this! Like, some story that gives Rose immortality, or something like that! It would make this story perfect! You've got the all human couple, then you have the immortal couple. I cracked up when you named him David, seeing as that's the actor's name, but I definately see him as a David. Very amazing ending that i wish I could've seen in the actual show!

Fascinating takeoff on an excellent episode. And who knows. it might have happened that way!

10 out of 10 stars. Now on to the sequel, right?

JE SHOULD HAVE ENDED LIKE THAT!

Cept for the five years later,
i dont like the idea of children
and if there was children,
i'd rather they'd just be pregnant
and have like a little sentence at the end
saying
'Rose gave birth to a girl (Insert name here)'
Because other wise they ruin it,
i mean, how would the children come on their adventures
with the partents?
And the Doctor should have left Donna and David on Earth.
IM SORRY BUT I DONT LIKE DONNA AS A PAIR FOR THE DOCTOR!

JACKIE!
IS!
AWESOME!

I WANT TO BE ROSE SO BADLY RIGHT NOW!

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TEN

Nyah. I do love 10.5, and all the else is okay too.

LD x

Good story.

Talia Taylor

awsome story and i'm so sad it's over. *crys*

loved it such a better ending then the real one
maria