I'm glad I stopped by just to check if there was anything new...I must have missed the last few alerts in my email. Because of that I'm going to review in general, not just this chapter. I'm sorry I missed so many chapters.

As always I'm, impressed with your ability to craft a story on the framework of something familiar, yet still having your take on the story stand strong on it's own. And now with so many offspring to keep track of and include in the story your organiztional skills are amazing. I keep thinking I need to make a chart of all the "original" characters/adults and their children as a reference. However you do an excellent job of smoothly showing who they are without interrupting the story.

You are coming up with some amazing evil twists to the story. Just when I think Dark Hunters cannot become any crueler, they do. While I realize the fight is paralleling that of HoDG, the excitement and wonder at what will come is nott diminished in the least. I know it is hard to kill of a beloved character, but without these dark moments the story would not be believable. I've read fantasy series of 4 books or more that never lose a main character in several thousand pages of fighting some sort of evil force and think that it is impossible to come through the story so unscathed. I don't care how strong good is, it will still lose some fighters.

Well I'll shut my "mouth" now. Again I apologize for missing so many reviews, but life has reared it's ugly head and kept me from paying as much attention to my email and stories I follow as I'd like. I look forward to the next installment eagerly knowing it will come at a time when I need a distraction desparately, you always seem to time them well that way.

ah,...sorry for not reviewing the last chapter! was super busy with school ><

I am really looking forward to read the battle! Your words always paint pictures for me

Lucky! A new chapter! So much going on! Sakuno got hurt, but I must say she kind of had it coming. I understand she was desperate to save Dan, but it was obvious that was a trap.
What does Taka san say about Akutsu's closeness to Dan? haha Talking about Akutsu, he is still posessed! I really think those creatures that Muraki created are going to be a lot of trouble for the mythics.

Kunisuke is so much love. He had to get revenge, since his twin made him wait, and no-one makes him wait! hahaha

Really nice how you make all the kids interact. Any ideas who will be Toshihiro's mate?
Oh, have you planned some unrequited love thingy? like what Taka felt for Fuji at some point?


Well, I know you are busy so I will let you do your things.
Thanks a lot for your updates, I'm always eager for more :)

Yay, update! It's funny how Kunitake has to come in a restroom XD I'm guessing he won't be late next time XD
(kicks Sanada) What a horrible father! How dare he bully dear Kano like that?! XP
Oh, I hope Sakuno's gonna be okay. So did they manage to rescue Dan? (gasp) Akutsu's still possessed, isn't he? :( Anyways, love this chapter!

Well... It's been a very long time...Since I've reviewed.
It just so happened that once I started school again, I came down with a nasty bout of pneumonia. Oh joy. And right after I recovered and was making up tests, I got the stomach flu. Yippee. -waves flag-
Could this...possibly... Be a sign...? -laughs-
Anyways. Great work, as always. Omg. I spy...A HET PAIRING. DanxSakuno~!! Squee~! I spy extra fluffy fluff when the whole war thing is over~
It's kinda funny. It took me. This long. To recognize the reference to Yami no Matsuei. I really should have figured it out during the descriptions of Muraki and Hisoka. -hangs head in shame-
Haha. Tsuzuki pwns. And he get's a hug from Hisoka! Win-win situation~!
But. The biggest question is...WHERE'S THE SUPER SMEXY AND UVER HAWT SMUT?!?!?!
I can barely make it through the day as it is, and without my daily dose of yaoi... -faints/dies/passes out/USE YOUR IMAGINATION, DAMMIT-
All in all, great chappie. Looking forward to more updates.

Ah! Now Sakuno's hurt too. I never realized that one of her tennis girls was named Yumiko like Fuji's sister.
Kintaro is Sakuno's son?! Never saw that one coming.
Shinji's youngest twin did get his muttering habit. Fun. I feel kind of bad for Kamio and Chihiro though. They have to deal with two ramblers daily.

Sakuno... -sniff- So sad...

Hm, Kunitake's rival is Jackal's kid? Interesting! Definetely an interesting twist!

I don't like seeing Akutsu and Taka fight. It's sad, makes me want to wack them over the head. Also, nice hinting at the AkutsuDan pairing there. They are really too close for their own good:)

Anyway! Can't wait till next chapter, as always!

Elle

P.S Mizuki had to leave for this review. He's visiting someone and couldn't make it.

Hey! happy new year ! Your "short" chapter is still much longer than most chapters from other stories, so dont worry!

This is getting more and more interesting. Now Mizuki might start having feelings for Yuuta's son, but what would Saeki say if they got together? he wouldnt be too happy now, would he?

Tsuzuki is such a cute character, you can play so much with all the different sides of his personality. Of course Muraki had to turn all perverted towards him haha

Now seriously, how will they save Dan with all those humans around? and while they are there fighting, their kids will be somewhere else unprotected, is that how Muraki plans to take them?
Fuji and Tezuka will be devastated when their kids go missing, poor them!

Kunitake seems like the type who would be late for playing tennis haha Yuki really cant control him at all. Doesnt Kunisuke have a bond hikari or some kind of personal guardian?

Well, I enjoyed reading this a lot and I will be waiting for the new chapter. thanks a lot for sharing and take care!

Huh, it kinda seems like Mizuki might get with Hageshii since he's similar to Yuuta. Ooh, I want cakes! (drool) Lucky Tsuzuki :( Dun dun dun, what will the Mythics do about that flyer? For some reason, I'm thinking that one of the dragons will be actually participating in the fair in their Mythic form. Hmm... Aww, Chihiro sounds so adorable (all of them do actually). I hope to see his brother eventually. Love this chapter!

I can't help but feel sorry for Mizuki. Sure he did some bad things in the past, but he really does love Yuuta. Too bad he couldn't grasp how he should have treated the 'Blood' when he had him.

And now we get to meet one of Shinji's and Akira's boys. It doesn't seem like Chihiro has Shinji's habit of muttering under his breath. I wonder if his twin does.

Good good. I don't think Yuki could stand having Kunitake being taken away again...

But cool chapter... Chihiro's kool... takes after his... wait, mother or father? well, whichever one Kamio is, anyway.

Mizuki: I feel like crying again...

You like helping me review this story, don't you?

Mizuki: Because I'm so important in it!

But you don't get Yuuta...

Mizuki: Details, details!

Lol, whatever. Till next time,

Elle

I've read this story... well, for so long. I loved it from the very beginning, and cried, laughed, and sighed over romances because of this story, and every chapter is definetely worth it. I was so happy when I finished the first one and could come read the second one. I especially like the Kunisuke/Ponta pairing, cause I'm a big Tezuka/Ryoma fan, so it made me happy that the two most like their fathers are together. Is Satoshi and Kaemon going to be together? Because surprisingly enough, I'm also a big Gakuto/Eiji fan, though I like the dirty pair MUCH more. And Masahiro and Kaida would be a kool pairing... though I'm not sure about the twins... Shiro and Yakuso, that is... Even though I'm a big Inui/Renji fan, and whenever I read those two that's what it makes me think of, I also think it'd be a bit like having two Inui's instead of Inui and Renji. Hell, I don't even know if your gonna make them a pairing, though it'd be kool if you did.

Mizuki: I gotta say, I absolutely loved chapter 6.

I know you did, Mizuki. By the way, if you think it's weird that Mizuki jumps into my reviews, don't worry, it's quite normal.

Mizuki: Elle-san cried.

I did. It was soo sweet... I'm such a big YuMi fan, and that was such a YuMi moment... Oh is Mizuki going to be with Yuuta's son? Because that would kind of make sense...

Mizuki: That sounds so weird. I know I'm a half elf in this story, and am probably really really old as it is...

(If you had said how old he was, I can't remember... sorry!)

Mizuki: And Yuki and Kunitake are no different... but still, if it was in real life, it'd just be odd...

Yeh, but then so would the twins' pairings.

Mizuki: True.

Anyway, I don't mind the obvious age different, or the incest (or incest like) stuff. It's all about romance, not anything else.

Oh, that reminds me... I'm kind of picturing a Toshihiro/Daisuke pairing in my head as well... I always did like a good Atobe/Shishido pairing, even though the Silver pair is my favourite pairing of all time... But obviously, anything is really good... I only give observations, and don't really expect them to be carried out unless it was the author's original intent. So, I hope you update soon, and while I'm waiting, I'll entertain myself with Trammel Line Stories, that I still haven't finished... though that Juice one was definetely a hoot!

Elle

OMAGAH! Yay for update! Reading Mythic goodness is always a great way to procrastinate 20 page essays of doom~

I've been awfully busy too, lately. For the last couple years, Christmas has ended up becoming THE HOLIDAY FROM HELL. My school thinks watching students fail finals/midterms/tests that are 20%of grades right after Christmas Break is entertaining. I probably study more over break than I do the entire year. Which is ridiculous. Meh. Who needs school anyways? -tosses textbooks out window-
Besides, ins't knowledge power, and doesn't power corrupt? Study hard, be evil~?

Wow. I guess 6 hours of writing essays makes one more prone to ranting? Essays also make me bored. And when I'm bored, I eat. are my teachers trying to make me fat? I'm running on Mountain Dew and marshmallow fluff and leftover candy corn and donuts right now, so sorry if I sound high, 'cuz I am.

Kunisuke and Kunitake had a prety intense tennis match O_O

When I play tennis...I swing my raquet (i got a new one! light blue and white~) I kinda just close my eyes and pray that I hit the ball...Because I'm pro like that~ I'm better at golf, which is pathetic D:

OMG! Smex?!!?!? Next chapter!?!? WORK THOSE MUSES! I have another paper due in two weeks...Help me procrastinate? :3

OMAGAH! It's snowing outside! Mebbe the lake will freeze over? I like walking on the ice~
I are waiting for next chappie~

Wah, that was total deja vu right there! I didn't watch much of the anime, but I did see episodes 174-176 (what TeFu fan wouldn't?). I really like how Kunisuke and Kunitake's match paralleled their parents' match perfectly. Love this chapter!

Will you be updating Mythic Christmas?

I ended my review too fast. >_>

I don't where was I cut off, so I am gonna start from here.

I didn't know Kunisuke had facial expressions, let alone SMILE. =D

Good job~ xD