I just love the fact that all chapters are beatles songs! I planned to do something similar, actually! I just love it!! I liked this first chapter, but I'm not sure I like the way you describe Albus and especially Scorpius... But I just started reading, so who knows?

AWSOME

First up - The names, Asp? confusing Scorp? No one but a really semicrazy fan wound know who you are talking about. Just because we know almost everything there is to know about Harry Potter doesn't mean everyone else does. And reading James Sirius over and over and over again is annoying.

Second - Get a beta

Third - The plot is good and the story flows good enough.

i love this! lol, its really good. I pitty James sometimes..and it tooke me awhile to understsand why you
call albus, asp, but i got it :D

Oh, such a great end! I loved it! And I was squeing very very much while reading this! NIce work!

Wonderful chapter and a beautiful way to end this story, I really enjoyed it. As for the epilogue, I can go either way on it so I'm leave it up to you. Though I think Chloe or Olivia or Marianna is a beautiful name for a girl. *hint hint*

And you have a lj? So do I. Mind if I add you?

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! :)

-honda

Ooh! Last chappie already? I've really enjoyed this fic so far.

I'm so happy the wedding went smoothly - and the fluff between Isolde and James at the end was wonderful! OF course, knowing them it's not going to last for long, but still - everything in moderation, right?

I'm subscribing to author alerts, as I'm desperate for a sequel and the companion piece. Asp and Scorp are so funny...

Chapter titles? I'm guessing here, but aren't they all titles (or lines) from Beatles songs? Of course there is the fact that the legend is often told as 'The Ballad of Tristan and Isolde'...right?

KEEP WRITING - Merry Christmas!

Aw, a puppy! I can see so many jokes about him being named Merlin...the dog in Labyrinth was named Merlin...

And I personally have my fingers crossed for a girl. And that her name will be Elizabeth (Aphrodite is just too harsh). But if it's a boy - SIRIUS ALL THE WAY!

And there's going to be a sequel? Ooh! Um...baby should be in this story, I think.

Really enjoyed the wee bit of fluffy between James and Issy - even though it probably won't last long...

Keep Writing!

Oh my gosh, ISSY DID IT!

(And I feel for James - sorta, not really as I'm a girl, but I do pity him - but...ISSY IS MY HERO!)

Hysterical chapter - off to read and review the next!

Keep Writing!

AW!

A puppy! Some big gun, isn't it? Bet they would have their hands full with a baby and a puppy.

The birth of the baby Potter should be here, to finish things full-circle.

Oh, and I just realized that the titles were from Beatles' songs ^^

Oh. My. GAWD!
I thought you were joking about the "manly bits!"
"easier to ride a broom" my arse! ha!

You know, it needed a fluffy chap like this...because as amusing it was to see them be all over each other and cursing and everything..they are a couple in love, soon to be married..and with this chap you brought that so good over! I enjoyed this one! Oh, I would end after the wedding! And now I'm all excited about the sequel! :D:D:D NIce work!

Heh...a four month old puppy. I hope he realizes with the baby it's going to be like having two at the same time.

Show Baby Potter now. Please. :)

And I love the bit of fluff. It was cute. Almost as good as the whole 'James Sirius' convo. I love Isolde. Thanks for the updates!

-honda

Oh my goodness. I am a chapter behind. I am so sorry for not reading and reviewing earlier. I remember getting your alert, but it was the holidays and things tend to get lost in my flood of emails and then I started writing this new story on here that I have to update once a day and ugh. My apologizes. I will try not to let it happen again

Poor James. It must really be hard to not have your 'manly bits'. (Though I'm not a guy so I really don't know how that feels. LOL)

Only two things you might want to correct in this chapter: "Disgusted, James realized groggily that Asp was dressed impeccably in a lime green sweater vest that made his stomach churn uncomfortably, a crisp black shirt, and pinstriped pants. His brother, dressed in his gay gayer gayest outfit, merely grinned and shook his head." I think you mean to say Scorpius instead of Asp, because you mention his brother in the next line.

And: "but then had remembered she was speaking to James," I think you mean wasn't isnstead of was. Small errors but a bit necessary to the story! hehehe

reading on...

-honda