Really like this story and anxiously waiting for the next installment.

Are you going to finish this story because it's looking really promising, and as Im sure you may already well know...many of us love tony whump! so keep posting please:)

Great chapter even if it was short. please don't leave it so long for the update, can't wait to find out what happens next.

No, sir, McGee, don't you go dying! You have to stay alive so Abby can hug you to death!

ehh... that was a little contradictory, huh?
lol update soon!

Brilliant chapter, can't wait for the next one! :D

omg plz keep going this story is rely exciting!
update regularly plz :D

Oh! the cliff! Please update son!

i really really like this story! i hope everybody's going to be okay. VERY VERY well written with good flow and grammar (sorry im such a geek about that).
Keep it up :)

Oh my, are they all going to be alright? Talk about tense. I wonder what Ducky and Palmer are thinking down in autopsy.

EGADS


Glad to see an update.
Hope to see another one soon!!

Got to find out what happened to McGee.

What a cliffhanger, please post soon! Seriously, I am enjoying this story and am looking forward to more, it's very well written and has a good storyline.

Another awesome chapter :) Cliffhangers are good...sometimes! LOL I think it depends entirely on when you're gonna next update! :D

ARGHHGHG

MORE please
and soon!

I really like this and I can't wait for more - I love Tony and Ziva together - but I'm faintly confused as to how they got out of the car. I feel like I'm missing a little piece. You're doing a great job of killing me with suspense though :)

If you don't update soon, I will PM you every day until you do, something like this:
"Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?Did you update yet?..."