BEAUTIFUL FIC!

love it...most awesome ending

no it was good all great stories need a filler capter.

Of course we noticed the song... It's as subtle as Hiroshima. Ahaha..

But it did fit.. And it's sweet.. Hee hee. :)

I'm reading everything at one go now cause I've been away for a while and now it's finally complete. Yay!

I can't believe it's done. Good job!

Good for Ava! She deserved for her line to take off! Wow! That's a lot of people! Dang! Bradin and Demi have four kids!

KARLA

Aw, it ended happily ever after! The story as a whole was good. Really good. You have a natural talent for writing and can pace out scenes really well, with nice blending of dialogue and descriptions. Good job! I'm sad it's over, but it ended on a good note:)

so good, so good, SO GOOD! haha i love how like every story on here ends with Bradin getting married, but i really like this ending for this story because it basically seems like it's the only good one! haha

can't wait to read the next- and last?- chapter! post more ASAP! haha

xoxo,

Mary

Deep stuff, man! It's so good that Demi is really happy. I felt bad for Bradin trying to find a way to propose. At first, he was awkward about it. LOL! I'm glad they're engaged! They deserve to be together after everything they've been through. Although, I'm sad that it is the second to last chapter, I'm glad everyone is happy! UPDATE SOON!

KARLA

aw that was so cute! i'm glad they are finally able to be together haha.

but i love it! you did a great job )

i can't wait to read more!

He proposed! Aw, that's so sweet! Does this mean it ends with a wedding? I hope so! Update soon! Too bad it's the end...Sad day.

Yay! Everything is coming to be perfect. Demi's mom is dead, sad, but she sort of deserved it... I'm glad that Demi resolved the Adam issue. UPDATE SOON!

KARLA

Aw, the story's coming to an end...sad day. But it's been good! Cemeteries are so interesting, yet creepy at the same time, and I don't blame her for being scared. And her mom is dead too? Her reaction is slightly odd, but considering all the things that have happened, it's to be expected. I really like all your interactions between characters. They always seem so realistic. Update soon! I'll be waiting.

yay! love that ending ) SO cute! i hope that everything goes well for them from now on ... which of course might mean that nothing will go well from now, because isn't that how it's done?

anyway, can't wait to read what's gunna go on next! man, i really don't want this story to end ( it's TOO good! haha

update asap!

xoxo,

Mary

noo - i liked this chapter! haha this story is AWESOME ) LOVE it. haha can't wait to read the next one, i have a feeling it's gunna be awesome and hopefully Demi will move on by visiting Adam's grave!

update asap!

xoxo,

Mary

That customer was a real DICK! LOL! OMG! Will Demi go to the graveyard? UPDATE SOON!

KARLA