ooh cool story keep going!

Very good.. a little short but I'll let you off since it's so good :):) but yeah..Sirius would explain it a bit more in detail the battle..umm I dunno.. very good

Ooooooohhhhhhhh! Carry on please! My constructive critisism is that Sirius wouldn't just say, "We had a little duel and then he evaporateed" really, he would explain it more. See ya! ;) fio2

That is sooooooooooooooooooo cool! Be careful not to use too many words that would be okay to speak but sound a bit stupid when you write them in a story! ;) fio2

whatever!whatever!whatever!whatever!

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Oo! A cliffhanger! Very good story. I liked how Chris with Lucius Malfoy. I wonder who Max is! Keep writin'!

DUDE! How could you leave me like that! AHHHHH lol..suspense to the keep it up? lol GREAT

DUDE! How could you leave me like that! AHHHHH lol..suspense to the keep it up? lol GREAT