lovely story, thank you for sharing.

What a great story, thanks for writing.

aw...lucky Yumi to have Sei and vice versa. ;) i miss the feeling of being in love.

cheers for this awesome fic!

I enjoyed reading this story very much!
It's beautifully written, and you caught the personalities of Sei, Yumi and Sachiko very well *thumbs up*
Great job!

I absolutely loved those sweet moments you described! And the last one... aw, it was awesome! So touching...

Thank you for writing this lovely fic!
Best wishes,
RubyNury

I definately like the chapter. And I like that you kept Sei in character. I sometimes have to stop myself from reading marimite fic because of the that. But. It's all good.

SEI x YUMI fic... XD I loved the way you wrote Sei's POV of their love story. Thanks ofr writing and sharing. Great fic!

That was a cute end to the fic.^^

yay! Sei and Yumi are together, well even though i prefer Sachiko and Yumi, but that's okay this couple is cute too hehe...thanks for the story, it was short, but it was worth it.

Well, well, soldier...

I'm glad to baptize this chapter.
It was just AW3SOME!

Sei wanting to break Sachiko's hand? Hilarious.
And the ending was sweet. B-E-A-Utiful.

Nice work, son. 'Lookin' forward to more from ya on this pairing in the future.
'til next time.

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

I'm looking forward to reading more of this fic.^^

Well, well, soldier...

Glad you updated.
Now, this was pretty interesting.
'Saw some typos here and there, so you should look out for'em in the next chapter.

Other than that, this was pretty good, son. It certainly picked my interest.
Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

You can still going every way you want. :) I am curious how you will go on, specially because of the scene at the end of the second season. Please go on writing. :)

Well, well, soldier...

This was interesting.
'Glad to see that there's somebody out there that shares my interest for this pairing.
They just look so...so CUTE together! LOL
This makes me think there was SOMETHIN' behind Sei's actions. LMAO

This was good, son. Very good. Continue it! That's an order!
Update ASAP!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Actually, If you don't write something, I will. If these characters were real, then I think that you would be dead-on about Sei's true feelings. But "once-burned, twice-cautious" seems to be her motto.

So, please write this story.

BTW, when did they kiss?

It looks like a good introduction to a larger story. It would be interesting to see how this story goes further. Yumi sees Sei as a good friend and someone she can talk to, so who knows. :)