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Lady Azura
2009-09-24 . chapter 1
That was a delightful read! :)
jocular monoceros
2009-07-09 . chapter 1
I do love this story haha it's hilarious. And Friends is hilarious, I was thinking about it while I was reading haha Nicely done, as usual.
Sand-Jounin-Temari
2009-02-14 . chapter 1
I actually saw that episode of Friends the other day!! The best days of our lives.. Get it?? anyway, great story. I really liked it..

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An-Jelly-Ca
2008-11-23 . chapter 1
Temari looked down to see that her hand was in fact linked with Shikamaru’s. She absently wondered when that had occurred. “What can I say? I’m a liar.”

I loved the ending. It was perfect. Fantastic story!
Rubberman2025
2008-10-17 . chapter 1
great story.
ihatewriting
2008-10-14 . chapter 1
so good! write more!
Picture
2008-10-13 . chapter 1
This was hilarious. I really liked the Temaru-Ino interaction. The Neji bit was priceless.
xlilyunyun
2008-10-12 . chapter 1
I knew this sounded familiar!
Great job with Temari and Ino.
So funny when Shikamaru tried to propose to her and she just kicked him
this is gonna go on my favorite stories list!
deathrosekitty
2008-09-24 . chapter 1
I love this I really do, the only thing that bugs me is that Sakura should dump Sasuke for Lee or Naruto or whatever and Ino should be with someone else besides Chouji. I love Chouji, but I like Ino with other people. Plus, it would totally get Sasuke back if she were with Itachi. Sorry, I'm rambling.
timkhj
2008-09-22 . chapter 1
sufficiently twisted, but a good read :)
A W A I I
2008-09-21 . chapter 1
AW I absolutly loved this! AMAZING!
T. A. Raskelt
2008-09-21 . chapter 1
MY absoulute favorite part was when Temari stalked over to Emo-teme and punched him in the face. NICE ONE, Temari! XD
song six
2008-09-21 . chapter 1
Wow!
This was an awesome oneshot! I really liked how Ino and Temari became friends...or became real friends...or not acquaintances or...anyways I also liked how in the end Ino and Chouji would be getting married. But unfortunately Sasuke just had to be the father, man was he a dick in this fanfic. But that's ok! This was a really good oneshot.

Keep on writing and I'll keep on reviewing!
maybeknot
2008-09-21 . chapter 1
It's better when Ino and Temari and friends. Always. Plus, it was so cute it didn't matter.

~Sai :]
Lydia-hime
2008-09-21 . chapter 1
Hahaha!! Yeah, I do have to say that this was OOC, but it was so unique and I loved it!
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