Well, I read the third chapter...to be honest, there are more mistakes than the first. It interrupts your story and lessens the enjoyment of reading it.

Here's an example of what you could do:
Snape walked briskly down the hallway. He was sure that the Order wasn’t enjoying the wait. Impatient, imbeciles. Snape scoffed as he walked into his room. The warm fire; still ablaze kept the room toasty. He fled to the bathroom where he opened a cabinet; inside he pulled out a wash cloth and three potions. He quickly wiped the blood clean from his forehead and took the potions back to Harry’s room. He uncapped the bottles and leaned Harry upward. Harry’s eyes fluttered in and out of sleep. Snape didn’t bother to talk to the boy, one potion was a dreamless sleep, another was for his cuts and bruises, and finally the last was for the black eye. After lying Harry back onto his side he turned on his heel and shut the bedroom door.
Another version could be:
Snape briskly walked down the hallway, sure the Order was not enjoying the wait. "Impatient imbeciles," he scoffed as he strode into his toasty room. He went to the bathroom to collect a wash cloth for his head injury and three vials of different potions selected for Potter's recovery. Wiping the blood clean from his forehead, he took the potions back to the guest room the little brat was staying in. He spelled the potions into the boy's stomach, as to avoid the hassle of waking him up and dealing with petty conversation. Once he was done, Snape quickly left, quietly shutting the bedroom door behind him. No use waking the brat up.

Just tryin' to help, not to offend.

Well, I just finished reading the first chapter, and I like the idea of the story...however, there are some errors you might want to look over. No biggie, and not meant to be an insult, just pointing out something you could do to improve the story. I agree with some others that your English isn't the best, which is fine (I understand it's not easy to learn, and not some people's first language), but maybe you want to consider a beta or get a friend to look over it(preferably someone with good writing skills and knows English well).
Other than that, you went through a lot of things very quickly. You could be a bit more detailed, but I don't think it needs that much improvement.
I do love the story, though. Hopefully you take that as constructive criticism as it was meant to be.
=D

rather interesting... i liked it

hahaha
“Potter?! What is he doing here!?”
As I moved onto the next chapter I was chanting.. "Please make it be Draco, please please please Draco!!"

I loved your story. I like that it was a father son relationship and friend ship. I love that it wasn't about Harry at school or at war but their realtionship it's self. Good stuff keep the stories coming.

To true. That was great.

Thank you very much for writing this lovely story. I enjoyed it a lot!

it was a good chapter and ending thank you

Aw, that was so sweet!

This story was really good. Thank you, I'm glad those two became friends in the end. :)

what a ending. Draco and Harry becomig friends (guess miracles can happen when in counts) Glad to see that everything turned out in the end the bad quys are gone and th rest of the wizarding world can move on in peace thanks to two special boys.

What's an EPOLUGE? You meant, Epilogue, I guess?

Please try a better checking before you post a chapter. I found the story very cute and not bed written, but the spelling... English is not my first language, I found it confusing to be introduced to newly compound words...

Fairly intresting. The time line seems a bit off though. I'm curious, but I'll keep reading.

it was a great finish to a great story!

Hey!

Great chapter, and very good ending. I love this story. :D

Keep up the good work and don't stop writing! =D