OMG! I really liked this chapter, really, i read it twice to confirm that i've read it well. And, omg, i couldn't belive, they are finally together *-*
And now? I'm really curious about what's gone to happen next. Please, update soon!

I have no words to express how I liked it! I hope you post soon (I'll bite my nails until then :D).
Cheers & regards!
bln26.

P.S.: Please, excuse my mistakes ^^ English isn't my native tongue.

Excellent ! I'm always amazed at how you can describe the sex scene without being the least vulgar or indecent... And finally they confessed their feelings for one another ! Yeah !
I liked how you showed and used the physical contrast between the two boys :)

The coming chapters are going to be interesting, I'm glad you're going to show how they'll deal with the situation and their friends.

It was worth the wait ;) Don't worry about the time between two chapters, as long as you don't give up the story, I'm happy and I'll patiently wait :)

Hello!!

You make my day !! Karl and Genzo are so sweet... I'm very happy for them.
This sentence "Or his friends and team-mates in Japan?" is for me ^__^, because you know I wait this!
I don't know if Karl has to tell his family so soon, but I'm sure his little sister anf father would be supportive, same thing for Kaltz.

Excuse my short review but I came back sunday from 2 weeks in Japan, and I'm always tired with the 7 hours difference...

Carine^^

It's here! Woo-hoo!

Waii~ I loved it! I felt it a little rushed, but the story HAD a fast tempo, so who cares ♥

I'm more than happy! *_* And the thing that I most liked was Genzou's characterization-- just saying I love you at the very end.

Ohh, please, I APPROVE of all those questions-- I will hold you up to your word! This has not truly ended! (Gah, how happy I am for that!)

Even if I like Karl as seme, this story was really a favourite, 'cause the situations and characterizations were good enough :D!

Thank you for updating and completing it!

Omg, it is so cool. I can't belive, I had really loved your writing and the ideas
I'm looking forward for your next update, keep up with the perfect work :)

Do you know, i also like Schneider/Genzo-thingy! (I prefer Schneider as seme) Too bad in my country they didnt play Captain Tsubasa: Road To Dream until the end! Arrgh! And bout ff, there arent too many KHS/GW! So Im glad when i found this story! x) Please update soon!

Oh, such a mean cliffhanger! Nice story thought, thank you!

Hey ! finally I got to read the chapter... Sorry, I hope you didn't think I was ignoring you... I was just gone for three weeks, and from there the silence.

But I found and read the chapter and here are my comments.

First, I'm very interested in the description of Genzo's house. I'm glad you explain his mom did all the decoration because I was wondering if in your version of Captain Tsubasa the characters were 40. It sounds like such an adult and settled house ! If it wasn't for the huge entertainment complex in the middle... And I was surprise by that description as you said in an earlier chapter that Genzo wasn't much for showing off his money (in opposition to Karl who is a new rich).

Second, honestly, no one among you readers can draw ? I'd love to see Genzo in that outfit, r ^^

Third, it's going too fast ! I was so convinced Genzo would make the first move and then Karl would freak out and they would suffer each in their city, understanding how they miss one another. And they would meet again, and apologize for their respective behavior and blah blah blah... I was expecting a full drama ! Here, it sounds a little too easy... are you the only author who doesn't like to torture the characters ?

Last, the title, hum... I liked the strategic aspect of "standing still" better... but I'm not saying that "endless skies" isn't pretty !

oh, please don't think I didn't like the chapter because I did. It's different from what I pictured in my thoughts, and it's not bad. After all, you're the author, you write YOUR story, and you do it well :)

a+

Chris

p.s: I review "anonimously" simply because of the old one.

I love your story and hope you update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Hello!!

Thanks to the alert, you make my day, well night...end of day ?
Anyway, I'm glad you update, and I'm very happy with the way the story takes. Next step: Genzo says "I love you too!" ^__^.
Just one point, i'm not sure it was necessary to put Ken and Kojiro in the story (i don't like Ken...), Genzo could easily be the only one gay football player of the show (with Karl of course).

Keep writing!

Carine^^

I love you.

The way you write, too.

And pairing. And...How could I missed this chapters? *shots self* It so good, and please, as Karl said at the end, he is not ready. Please don't rush it (even if I just want that...hee.), and keep up the great work!

I'm looking forward for your next update, and thanks~

keep on going
with the drama!
But i can't believe that
Philippa is so
smart that she
figured it out!
anywayz keep up the good work. . .

OH GOODIE! They finally... finally... "finaly" aloone... omg! I can definetely rest in peace right now... haha...

Hm... wonder what's gonna happen... *eyes twinkling*

And oh!! did you wrote this while in a meeting... AGAIN? Haha...

Pwease update soon!

PS: WHAT THE HECK? Me? writing with this couple? Trust me... you guys gonna get a nightmare for... "month" haha...

Ok, first, it's WAY TOO SHORT ! You end the chapter right when something is happening. And I do not necessarily mean because they are together but, apart from them meeting, there is nothing but description in those lines.
I'm not saying the chapter is bad, it simply isn't enough to make a unit and create a situation/progression.

So I hope the next one will be longer and more satisfying on that level.

and oh, I almost forgot ! I love the new title, it's more "mysterious" and makes me think of some hunting strategy ^^