Ah, I really enjoyed. It’s got a good morose and disillusioning feel too it…which is pretty realistic, because come on, I think anyone would be bored to death being stuck at home after traveling through so many different worlds and basically saving the universe.

Aww. Poor Sora. I've always wondered wha would happen after everything finishes. I don't think Sora and Riku couldjust settle back into their old life. :(

This is wonderful, short and very heartwrenching. :D good work.

Hm...I've always had issues with angst ('cuz I'm a hopeless romantic who likes happy endings, lol), but I know a good story when I see one, and this is definitely a good story. It's always a good reality check (well, sort of) to remember that Sora accumulates a dark side, especially during KH2. Plus, your writing is very good for someone found on FFN and even just in general. I would unfortunately have to disagree with this point of view, however. I highly doubt that the trio would be stuck back on the island. After all, remember the message in a bottle at the end of KH2! Or maybe I still just want a happy ending. Oh, well. Brilliant story. Brilliant writing. Keep it up!

-Aly

The only good fics I can find these days is in angst. Pitiful ain't it but nonpairings are also great. I expected the same thing to happen as you wrote here, I can imagine this kind of character from Sora. Its a wonder why every doesn't write about the trio returning home. There needs more actual KH stories like this and less AUs :D

That was beautiful. It was good to see the happiness and hyperactivity FINALLY sucked out of Sora, haha. But on a more serious note, the whole oneshot just flowed perfectly. It was brilliant.

Lookin' forward to more of your work :D

I love how realistic this feels. People tend to forget the very thing the trio were doing before there life -- and world -- imploded. They were trying to build a raft to leave their home and explore other worlds, which two of the three managed to do in the end, after all.

Fighting and saving people became Sora's way of life, or life itself. The way it so suddenly ended would no doubt leave him at a loss, as unsure of what to do with himself as you've portrayed. But, of course, this is Sora; he wouldn't let on that he's not all smiles and rainbows.

The only /slightly/ negative thing I can mention is that, in my opinion -- which can mean absolutely nothing to you, and that would be okay -- Sora wouldn't be stuck on the Islands everyday until the day he dies; aren't there still Heartless in the other worlds that had yet to be destroyed? Destiny Islands would probably be his home, where he lives and sleeps -- or in this case, not :) -- but he might come and go as duty calls. The others would still need him, after all, seeing as he's the Keyblade Master.


But this was a wonderful oneshot, one which suits its length just fine, but could potentially be turned into something more should you choose to.

You never fail to please :)

great short story :D
kinda emo though, but thats OKay~
If this is anythign like the enxt story you'll update I can't wait!
5/5

This was /good/.

A darker side of Sora... I like it!

I think this would be a great story to continue... but hey, if it's meant to be a oneshot, let it be. :D

Great job! (I really /do/ hope you continue it.) And I hope you post more soon!

-disney

YES.

YESS.

Moar. Moar risokura and even though this was a oneshot, LOVELY. I like how you have SORA dwelling over the changes rather than Riku, and instead of having Sora be sweet on the outside and chocolate on the inside!!8D, you made him have some other feelings besides happy!

Ilu.