hey i loved it!

really good. no offence intended... but those are really horrible names. Prudence? Anyway, the story was love-a-li!!

YAY! i love the ending for that chap!

don't worry i hate elevators too. especially ones in hospitals... they're so fast and they make u all disorientated

i think the word is antsy not angsty

I love this story, theres a reason I think you should put it in the time capsule

there was much "awing" and SQEEing when i was reading this. Good work!


love

They probably don't have hit men, but whatever.
Interesting. I want to know how this progresses. I like it, good job.

Aww i really loved this story and hope that after November u start another story keep up the great work :-D

aww typical tiva never actually geting together fully - yet :-D

Aww, sweet. I like the epilogue.

Oh no poor Ziva i hope they will find her soon and kill Asa

Naww great ending!
Thanks for writing! Looking forward to more of your work :)

Peachy

Good end, I loved your story :o)

OMG! YOU LIED TO ME! YOU SUCK!

Such an awesome ending!! :D

I loved it! I really loved Prue :D

xoxElle

What a nice way to end the story. Emjoyed every moment of it