 Growing Pain 2008-09-22 . chapter 1Incredibly in depth, and somehow these two characters work well together! Despite their flaws and oddities. I really like the baggage they both have brought in to the relationship. It makes it feel realistic and real.
Ending was wonderful; the part about Jounouchi's hope was strength and it was demanding of how to expect it of it of others (which he seems to do!)
Anyhow, lovely, overall :) Can't believe I read a fic with these two together :o Even if it was more like a two-way character analysis.
Keep it up!
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