Unconventional...who would lay with a girl he literally just lifted off the dirty sidewalk. After a bath of course, (chuckles). Maybe Bella will continue to talk in her sleep giving him some insight to her unusual circumstances.

Edward the good Semaritan!

If this was a first attempt at writing, I very much look forward to your increasing literary prowess.

Storyline look great.

Must read on.

aw, *Sighs* I absolutely loved this completely captivating and utterly amazing story! Thanks for sharing

love love love!

loved reading this story such a sweet ending x

Absoultely lovely story! Awesome job!

An excellent story- great plot and characters. Loved it!

I found this yesterday and was hooked! I loved it. Thank you for writting it :D

Bella, Bella, Bella... You should have trusted Edward. He is NOT Mike or James. Listen to your heart, not your rambling head. Tsk tsk, my dear.

Dang, honey! If Edward (or someone like him) would have offered ME this kind of deal I would have swallowed my pride and said "HELL YES!" lol Sigh...only in fairy tales.

I really, really abhor James, Jessica, Victoria and Mike in this story. I keep chanting KARMA, KARMA! lol

Edward really did sock it to Mike! But now James is going to cause even more problems. Dang. Someone is always stepping in to interrupt B&E getting closer.

I know it's all fiction but sometimes the fluff (or lack of) is a good fast read! I needed this little distraction as RL and work has been a bear this week and I'm loving this emotional vacation!

Gah...this Edward just oozes sexy.

This was definitely a sweet Prince Charming chapter. But the angst of Bella seeing Mike again is soon to come. I just hope someone beats the crap out of him for doing what he did to Bella. Maybe Edward will nix the sporting goods part of the business and axe the turd. ;)