I really like this story so far. I can't wait til you update ").

Interesting... I hope you continue this, soon! I think it's very well written so far.

SSG.

I love this story! Ryou is absolutely adorable and I love how you've portrayed his sweetness and innocence. And how nice Bakura is to him, even though he's trying not to get attached.
The plot is great and I can't wait to read more of this awesome story!
Great job, as always!
~Melody

Aw! Little Ryou kid! I want one!

Loving your characterisation of Bakura, by the way. Bitter and cynical seems about right to me. I can actually believe he's real instead of something drawn from a fangirl's mind. I'm impressed.

Is it wrong to find this hot? Bless little Ryou, he's so adorable. And even cuter when he's hurt... I have to go read the other chapters now. I want to know what happens!

Ryou's cooking reminded me of my own... 0_o and this is yet another amazing story to be added to my favorites! excellent job! update soon!

quiero saber que pasa despues no aguanto la duda y esta bien buena la historia

This is very cute XD
I'm excited to read more!

monster is Bakemono not bakimono

Aw! It's like Chibi-Ryou meets caring-yet-still-somehow-Bakura Bakura! This is such a cool story! Please update soon! I gotta know what happens next! :)

Very cute. I hope you continue this.

Aw. Ryou is just too cute. Awesome job! Please update soon!
-WT

Interesting. Bakura-san likes Ry-kun and he just won't admit it! Hey, nice job Niilan> You're doing better then me as far as updating. I'm so awful! I feel terrible. ANyways, thank you for your updates. This was very fun, and i'm enjoying reading your fics. I can't remember where it was...during the phone call I think. But there was a "you're" that should have been "your". Anyways, just though I'd mention that. Love the update!

~Angel

Could you put less japanese in your fanfictions? It's like Chinglish; a last resort. It chops up your writing and makes it a lot worse than if you just stuck to Japanese.

Or at least, take parantheses and put the English translations right after it.

But seriously, putting in choppy japanese like that weakens the quality of your writing. I suggest you don't put it at all. Just stick to English.

Agh, Niilan, I am sorry. I'll never know how the devil I missed this chapter! But it was great regardless. I'm off to read ch. 3 now!