That was just lovely. A wonderful, well-written, in-character feast of sensual romance. Oh, so amazing.

Well written,grammar errors here and there. But nonetheless,it was acceptable to my eyes.

I know Ali Wildgoose! Talked to her on twitter,she's working on The Last Airbender manga coming out next year. :]

- Jun

This is such an awesome fic - I love the fluffiness! The two of them are so perfect together, and I love the way you write them. Your perspective on Mai especially is spot-on: many people make her too emotional or else pathetic next to Zuko, but you manage to perfectly convey her normal emotional control while still showing the strength of their love for each other. The best was that scene where she's sitting on the bench listening to the generals - it's so hopeful for the future and makes them seem so strong together. Some of the best Maiko I've ever seen.

very good story! i liked it a lot :D

such a sweet story ^x^

Wow. I love it.

Whha, that's super cute.

It totally captures Mai and Zuko's personality and relationship. It's so subtle, but it's there anyway. LOVE THIS.

This is such a beautiful story. I think you got Mai's personality dead on. Maiko is my favorite avatar couple and you just made my day. ^_^

Fantastic ... just fantastic.
Really enjoyed reading it - you must update soon! xD

I LOVED IT! YOU CAPTURED THE CHARACTERS PERFECTLY! YOU'RE AWESOME! SIMPLY AWESOME!

Ahem ...
Well, it's funny, I've used some of the same things in my own fanfic, like the "I kind of love you," part xD Funny we both thought that that's what she'd say. Well, it's Mai!
Hope you have more fanfics like this!

AW! SO CUTE! :) :) :)

Very good :D

Aw cute.

This was a very nice piece from Mai's point of view. Nice work.

This is probably one of the best pieces I have read about Mai and Zuko, especially when it is from her viewpoint. The characters were totally spot on and you're writing excellent.