 soulman3 2008-09-24 . chapter 1Weird but funny at the same time.I do hope you make a squeal.
I like Kim,Bonnie,Tara,Boss(Mr.Barkin) and Punchy(Ron). |
 motorized-sasquatch 2008-09-23 . chapter 1You ain't rockin' unless you rockin' with Dokken!
*ahem*
LAWDS! I laughed, I cried...okay, I just laughed. Holy crap, this was hilarious. Lots of subtle jokes mixed in with the more obvious ones...hilarious characters...the whole thing was a riot. If this gets continued, I'll so be there. |
 bigherb81 2008-09-23 . chapter 1Hey buddy glad to see your back! I was a little worried when all your stories were taken off your page I thought that you were done doin' your do. I see that you haven't lost your touch for the art of the story. This was HILARIOUS I'm glad I work graveyard so no one heard me laughin like a psycho. This thing is like a cross between so many funny ** concepts reading it I wouldn't be surprised if you did a Three Stooges type story sometime down the line. I wanna get mad at dumb you make Ron, but you make him that likable ** that we all wanna hang out with just to see what he does next. Something tells me you've got experience with one of those. But hey glad to see you back and I can't wait to see what you do next like catch up and finish Horny Lil Devils or start back up that Shego story you were workin on I can't remember the title. Glad your back lookin forward to more of your work. |
 Fallin' Brick Blues 2008-09-21 . chapter 1That was mighty enjoyable, pal. A little over the top, but entertaining. And in case you decide to continue, I suggest callin Kim "Rita 'Red' Raptor" or "Susan Sharpheel".
Luck in life.
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