That. Was. Intense.
Vaaaaaaan, you sneaky you!
Am I the only one here who never really liked PeneloxVaan? (Well, I don't because Vaan is mine.. But reading this, I say, Balthier, I can share with you).
At the end of the first chapter I was like "YEAH! THAT'S WHAT YOU GET!" - and some other not so friendly words Penelo was called that day.
And then after that I was like "NUUUU- fall into Balthier's arms, Vaan! Do it."

love it!

Aw man, Vaan just give in already. I'm a stubborn person, especially when angered but i would have been putty by now lol.

Loving this story and i hope you update soon. :-) I am very much interested in what Balthier has stolen!

I'll be waiting eagerly.

ESB.

this was intense! i love how you've written it! cant wait for more :) please say you're writing more!

Well this story is definitely different than most other bal/vaan stories and I like it. Vaan seems very hot tempered but I guess he has reason to be. I particularly like how guarded Balthier seems about his reasons for being attracted to Vaan.

Just found your story and speeded through all of the chapters. Wow. First BELIEVABLE Vaan/Balthier fic I've found without "everyone sleeps with everyone"-premise. Good job in keeping these characters also in character, which makes me loooove you. This could be cannon in my head. Wow. Hope you haven't abandoned the best fic of this category. :D

Haha I felt awkward the whole time that, that kiss happened. I was like Vaan, you're going to be leading him on XD

Anyway I like how this story has panned out so far, its funny and nice to read, would defiantly like to see how the story progresses further :)

I'm not gonna lie angry Vaan is pretty damn hawt!

Ha so Vaan should! I'm glad he stuck up for himself, although he sould have Given Penelo a little bit more time to speak at the start, but he dragged it out of her in the end :)

I must say this is a good start to a story, something dramatic like this really sets a scene for things.

Oh the suspense is killing me! Next chapter pleeeeease?

"Now what?" Now you continue your rather excellent tale with another chapter.

Please? I'm dying to know what Balthier stole, and how he intends to fix the situation. WHERE'D IT GO?

I love this story! Please update soon!

No! You left me hangin!

Ok so usually I am loathe to get into the Vaan/Balthier, but this is incredibly hot and I love every dripping word of it, and I am pretty much begging for more.

this is like really really good. I hope that you keep on writing it.

I love it update soon pleasssseeeee!