Oh Damn. I knew I shouldn't have started to read this. I have things to do! I blame you!

Good god...You had me worried there when Sam stayed behind :eek: I know I love Sam whump but I don't like dead Sam :p

But anyways, another great story by a great writer. I'll have to keep an eye on your stories from now on if the two i've read over the last few days are anything to go by. I might even change my stance on reading WIP's for your stories :D

From 11pm to 645am, I read it STRAIGHT THRU!! Loved EVERY MINUTE OF IT!! (P.S. That's CENTRAL TIME)

So, this is the second time I have read this story. Nicely done. It is well written, interesting and (I feel) true to the characters we love. I truly enjoyed it!

You've written some of the best action I've read. Very believable. Thank you.

Wow - just read the entire story. I am so not a S/J sipper but because it was so understated this really worked for me. The plot was fantastic, the characterisations spot on.

Well Done :)

And you got Cam in too - hes my fav

Hello!
So, Stargate Fan Awards led me to this story.

Allow me to take a minute to happily spazz over how much I enjoyed it!
I have been itching to read a fantastic adventure with a great plot lately. And I absolutely adored your character interactions!

I'm a specifics person - so the scene where Jack is on Dakara and Daniel has been running to get help for Teal'c and Carter (are you with me so far?) Well, you have Jack ask if Daniel enjoyed the run, Daniel sarcastically says he likes the burning in his legs, to which Jack starts talking about the rowing machine being better. And it's all in the middle of the craziness that has been ensuing.

You have so many perfect character moments like that!

And you made Sam snarky! I love a snarky and witty Sam. So many people paint her as...determined but fairly mindless and lacking personality. At least that is how I would put it.

Good work! And thank you!
I will gladly rec and follow your work now.

Amazing. Simply amazing.
me = blow away.

This was one of the most enjoyable stargate fics I've read. Awesome plot, good grammar, all around just a well-written piece. And just for the record, I enjoyed your "warning" labels just as much as I did the actual story. :)

Thanks for writing a really good tale. It was a good balance of dialogue, action and just a pinch of shippiness.

This was absolutely the best story I have ever read on !! You totally nailed the characters and the writing was top notch. Well Done!

For your first full length story this was an amazing job. Everyone was in character, just enough ship without it being in your face, wonderful angst and a rip-roaring adventure. I look forward to your next time out.

Wow.

Let me first say that I've been recc'ing this fic all over GateWorld. This is one hell of a work of fiction, and it kept me enthralled for a good five days. It's on my PDA and I simply couldn't put it down.

I'm exceptionally picky about my fic, and yours certainly fits the bill. No grammar errors (I teach rhetoric, so...really, I get itchy when the grammar is bad), no spelling erros, fantastic sentence structure, great dead-on character portrayals, and most importantly, a gripping plot.

Really, I loved this story. Can't wait for your next one.

Best,
Pol

I read this a few days ago but had issues logging in to review. This was an amazing story that I couldn't put down. Every word was filled with suspense and love between S/J. I knew it was anise lol:P Love me some Ba'al as well :D:P Thank you so much for sharing it and I look forward to anything else in the future:D

amazing story! the sam/jack wasnt overly stressed and the action was amazing!

Wow, what a great story. This is the best one I have read in quite a long time. You are a very descriptive writer. I can't wait until you post something else Stargate!! I really enjoyed this story a lot.