 Expecting Rain 2009-01-02 . chapter 1Aw, that was really sweet. Your characterizations are perfect. |
 I Suspect Nargles 2008-12-06 . chapter 1(: Thanks for making me smile.
Wonderful, you're a great writer.
It's not often you find someone who can nail absolutely every character perfectly, so yay for you!
+Favorites. |
 Wotcher-Tonks 2008-11-08 . chapter 1cute. |
 XMarisolX 2008-10-16 . chapter 1Flawless, it is like you are a writer for the show. The big things, like Kelly's prattle, is easy to do. A lot of authors do. But your genius is in the details and the careful narration of the mannerisms of the characters. Like Michael's protracted "Shut up" or "You are Ellen Pompeii—”. I am also glad Dwight wasn't there, since there is no way he would haven been able to tolerate that environment.
But then this could have just been a crazy romp (which i still would have enjoyed), but then you add that very tender part at the end. And it is totally believable that Oscar would be sympathetic since he also had a unbeliebably humiliating personal relevation at work. It was just PERFECT. |
 True Queen Of Chaos 2008-10-03 . chapter 1Aw, that was so sweet! And sad, but mostly sweet. I do so adore Oscar... "what were you expecting? a gay orgy?"
funny stuff right there :P
*favorited* |
 Alex Wert 2008-09-22 . chapter 1You did Angela's religiosity great justice, probably better than I've done in my attempts, so that's always entertaining. I'd have to say that your characterization is among the best I've seen, especially your Michael and Kelly. If I were you, I'd be worried. |
 lyin' 2008-09-21 . chapter 1ha, 'then she'd just thought he was catholic. that was disquieting enough' was terrific- i think no. 3 was actually my favorite, the hand sanitizer was too priceless. really, terrific job getting angela's thoughts and oscar's voice down, i'm continually impressed by how on-target your office fics are :D you're making me really look forward to the season premiere, thanks for the read, good luck and keep writing! |
 JAMonMyToast 2008-09-21 . chapter 1Aw. Aw. Aw.
You got Angela's thoughts to a T. I was a little amazed.
I also have to give you kudos for Michael and Oscar's words and expressions. And Kelly. And Kevin. Oh, and the little bit about Jim.
Haha. Loved it! |
 gnbrules 2008-09-21 . chapter 1Oh, wow. I loved it so much. I mean, it feels very real and true to the characters. And I love that I get to see this pairing explored. So original, it makes me incredibly happy. |
 LoverFaery 2008-09-21 . chapter 1Aww. Cute. Very complex. In a good way. Shows all the different facets of the Oscar/Angela dynamic... she views him as both a comrade and an enemy. Well done. |