Very Marlowe, beautifully written ... I would pay to see Dean fighting for money ;) I've enjoyed your stories immensely and hope you're writing professionally!

Great, hot writing, perfectly paced. The lady in question is a superb character. Beautiful, sexy story: thanks!

This was exceptionally written. I loved your story structure and your tone stayed consistent throughout. GREAT job!

Words cannot express how this story made me feel. Thank you for sharing this!

Well, dang, that was a wonderful read. And funny as all get out at the end. Brilliant! Thanks for posting here.

Phoebe