You HAVE to finish this!! Seriously it's so funny! I LOVE IT!

I need more of this story!

Thank you for sharing with us!

This story is so cute! I love it.

Another great chapter with wonderful details. Sounds like an exhausting day. I wonder how it will all end up? Are the boys worried too? Nice cliffhanger.

lovere it

Hee, very funny. You capture well the obnoxious commercialism and non-stop shilling by Disney. The kids are adorable here. I love John's protectiveness of Teyla. Great job.

lol oh god this storeis funny.

oh no! lost teyla!!
thanks for the update!

Great chapter!

Birnbaum's is so cool.

Loved the kids meeting. So sweet. John renames the handshake. :D

Sure, ice cream is food. It's a dairy serving. Uh huh.

"pink girly shop" :D

Uh oh John. Shouldn't have called it a stupid doll... :D I'm sure she'll still be able to kick his butt even if she is shrunk.

Attack of the birds, hehe!

She's lost??!!? Oh no!

Loved the chapter. Update soon!

my absoulute favorite story for stargate. plz hurry and update!

Cool~ Can't wait for more!

This story's so cool. Love this chap.

Teyla is so cute! Aw! Love this story!

Interesting..

ever since i read this a few days ago its been my new fave story on

keep on the awesome wok and update soon!