Aw. This one was really good too. I salute you for taking on such a hard task. I think you did a wonderful job and I hope you write more!

THIS STORY WAS SO CUTE!
Never stop writing what u want to write about.
U R AMAZING!
much love:P

i read all of your stories and this is got to be my favorite out of them great job. cant wait for more storied by you.

In all truth i really thought that you have amazing writing skills you should try to write a full length story

This was fabulous! I loved it. I'm so happy that you wrote Edward's POV first. I am looking forward to reading it from Bella's POV. I hope that will be coming soon. The only mistake I read was when you described Bella's eyes as being golden. They were still bright red at this point since she had only hunted once and it takes months for them to turn amber and then gold. Still fantastic job yet again! I can't wait to read more from you.

I found this to be very good and feel that you truly captured a certain essence of Edward. You really have a knack for writing.

very good. am looking forward to reading Bella's perspective in detail :D

i love your stories, they are so well written and are kept close to characters and books. You do a really great job at these sort of stories. so, well done and good luck with the story you are working now:) just wow. love your writing technique. this is probably my longest review so far. Anyway, you are talented-that's all. keep it up

extremly good! wow. nice job =D

It was an okay insert to the story. I personally think it was drawn out. Just too much babble. It didn’t have the oomph it could have had.

this one is like way over done. like too much detail. cuz i can't even finish it. like i started to get bored at it's longevity. i don't know what else to say except.. you just over did it.

I just spent half the day at work reading your stories. Amazing. My heart was beating so fast the entire time! Thank you for this insight into my favorite little world. I can't wait to read more from you!!

aww that was amazingly cute and so emotionally intimate at the same time.

Will you be adding the other scenes left out from the third part of BD? It would be great to be in Edward's head during the time that they had the night after Alice left and of course the last chapter

omg.
this was beautiful.
my favourite of ur stories so far.
my ABSOLUTE favourite twilight fic.
wow.
it was THAT good.
=)