I think this might be made a little better balanced if triangles were removed. In particular, Kodachi is overused.

[Update - it is known now that it's only a first chapter a bigger fic which is a rather dense mesh of relationship links. This invalidates the review, but I had no way to know. The fic was not updated since 20. I won't spoil, read about it when the author updates ... somewhere in 2008 :-)]

that sucked and gave me nightmares

Boy, it sure would be nice if you could actually have the courage to sign a review with your name.

But I think you failed to grasp just what the point of this story was - to write the most convoluted and insane match ups I could in the fastest amount of time.

It has some OOC elements, yes, that I'll grant you.

But if you would really like to help improve this, please give me specific advice - that, my friend, is what I'd appreciate.

This was horrible. The characters were totally wrong. Almost none of the real characters acted like this.

What? YYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY! I'm rooting for all you Jeremies!

Huh? I've seen this before (sees sanity pill) AAAAAAAAHHHHHH! GET IT AWAY FROM ME!

*holds out sanity pill* Want one?

Okaaaaaay. Ummmm... My friend works at the mental institute. Here's her number.

Believe me, you need it. 1-800-wacko