Toph is so wrong!

ROFL! I loved Aang and Katara's little bickering moments, and I thought it hilarious how Lao Bei Fong almost literally bored Aang and Katara to death. Serves Katara right for choosing kisses over friendship. XP I also thought it was kinda funny how Poppy kept trying to get Toph and Aang together. (Tee hee).
That was very, VERY well-written and clever and witty and hilarious at times, and I thought it was great how Toph ended up bonding with her parents and getting to know them better and get along with them.
I loved this fanfic. It's definitely going to be added to my favorite stories list.
Keep up the fantastic work!

Tres

lol.I love it.

I loved Toph's character in this epecially for setting Aang and Katara up with her dad for a really boring day and I liked how she found that she could get along with her parents if she just talked to them. Really good!

This is pure genius. I love the ten-hour tour idea; it's similar to a prank I wouldn't mind playing on my little brother. Keep it up, and who is Toph's mystery man going to be? Oh.. lol

Please write more, and is there gonna be another sequel for after they leave the Bei Fong's ?

simply amazing. i love your writing style.

im one of those readers who likes to read but hates commenting, but i have to say that you have done a great job on both stories!
i just love the way you are able to keep everyone in character! the stories are great and also, i do needa ask somthing...
is this storie likea collection of one shots bout toph and her family? are ya gonna write more? cos i have to say that whenm you ended your first story i was very sad but just today when i saw the email in my inbox i was all... YAY!
ANYWAYS, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Danni

Vengence, thy name is Toph! That was wickedly funny.

Good to see Toph and her Mom comming together. Something everyone should realize-that you can be friends with someone even if you have nothing in common.

Looking forward to the next one-shot.

Lol :D Great job :D

What a wondrously delightful story. Very good, and very much in character, I believe.

LOL! Nice one with Toph's vindictive streak and her trying to court her off to Aang. Like a sister.OMG!XD I simple love this one-shot and hope to have more in the future.

Great story. I think that you were able to capture the dissonance between being loved for who you are vs. who someone wants you to be, which is a cornerstone of Toph's personality, while not losing that part of her that is really sweet and caring (although she'd never admit it.) You've got the cadence of her humor as well.

very funny, i look foward to reading the rest of your oneshots and then continue onto your next chapter fic... i to would feel sorry for your beta, so much work