wow the ending really was unexpected but i really liked it. the part with ronon and hte hundreds of 'lorne' was funny! lol. really liked this fic. XD definatly favs.

THanks for sticking with the fic!

Ahh! wait, so Lorne's alive, Nox-Lorne is gone/dying, Sharmilla-Joth is an evil muderer, Kellerax-Six is helping Sheppard, McKay and now Lorne, and Ronon's stunned? Okay I think I got that straight... lol

Great chapter(s)! (that includes Chap. 11 too, I didn't get to read that before now.) I can't wait for the next chapter, because I know it'll be good!! -SA

Oh jeez...

That was amazing! (I'm speaking for both chapters 9 and 10, both were updated when I got here.) I really like this story, it's really pretty epic. Can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens!

This is awsome! All is comming to a head! I'm looking forward to further chapters. I am loving this!!

Hm... Interesting chapter. I like the bits between Lorne and Nox, it's making me think about what could possibly happen. I'm entirely sure I'm wrong, of course, but I'll just have to wait and see where this goes. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one! -SA

I really like the subtle cyborg twist (visible tattoos, body as vessel, etc), and the tension that creates for everyone's relationship with Lorne/Nox. Please keep that originality! (no falling prey to some of the tried but tired cyborg-become-human storylines as in Borg, Replicators, etc.) I look forward to more!

WOW ... that's all I can say reight now. This looks like it could be brilliant!

Great work!

I can't wait for more!

this is amazing! i love the storyline. i can't wait to read more. please update soon!