|Reviews for More to the Story|
| nequam-tenshi 10/28/12 . chapter 22
I have been re-reading your story from the start to the most recent chapter - I keep crying! I like how you are giving each pairing equal spotlight!
| Guest 6/29/12 . chapter 22
Ami having psychological issues with facing her problems really fascinates me right now! It just fits so well with her character! XD
Anyhow the bad guy is epic ;) I definitely laughed at the mention of all those shows and though they are supposed to be kid friendly and all they do make me cringe lol I mean Spongebob my gosh I once fell asleep during one of those shows and his laugh haunted me in my dreams ; It was pretty scary. But in short, I can definitely relate to the cringing effect some of those shows have heh. Quatre and Ami make the most adorable set of siblings in my opinion. They are both just so sweet! I also died with the memory with Ami and Wufei. I love those two and you do those scenes so well! XD Geez those two are great together.
I really loved the bit between Trowa and Hotaru. Having those two up late also fits their character. It was interesting to see into his thoughts on their situation and his reflection on Minako and her character was really insightful. And my goodness I can't believe you stopped before we got to see Haruka's uptake on the situation XD lol
What a horrible cliff hanger! I definitely look forward to seeing her reaction soooooo bad!
Nevertheless, I'm looking forward to seeing the juicy twist you'll be adding! I do love twists! Wonderful job with this update and I can't wait to see more from you! And keep up the great work!
| MegaKat 6/23/12 . chapter 22
As always, a GREAT chapter! Some corrections needed, of course, but I'm waiting with bated breath to see Haruka-papa kick some braided ass? That would be worth watching! :D
| angelic.aquarian 6/23/12 . chapter 22
Yay a chapter. poor Trowa... i so love him and Mina. with what you were saying about her being strong and not showing weakness is so true. it just gave me an image of Mina rambling on and fighting with Trowa while he just waits to catch her when she has no fight left. sad lol
oh Ami lol she is too cute with her blushing ways lol.
also loved learning a bit more about the bad guys.
great story can't wait for more
| Oombala 5/12/12 . chapter 21
Wonderfully written, as per usual! And you're driving memup the wall with giddiness with he quatrexmakoto stuff going on! 3 Soooooo ready for more!
| Nerf-or-Nothing 5/12/12 . chapter 21
Dear god, this is incredable! WHERE HAVE I BEEN! Oh yeah I'm moving and my jerky ex is trying to take the laptop from me :C
But I am here now and WOW! I LOVE IT!
Your grammar and attention to detail and description like always, is done well and only gets better with every time you write something!
I'm so happy to see more updates, it's really great how you guys are doing this. Thank you so much for all your hard work c: it makes me really happy.
Now onto the review!
Wufei really isn't that much of a woman hater, your right. There were circumstances that led to his feminine-hating ways. With his wife and what happened, it was no wonder, he was a scholar and he's chinese and women are viewed differently. An arranged marriage but he did fall in love with her, perhaps to little to late :c
I agree with you on Hiiro not being so cold with family around, as he had been kind with the young girl and her dog and showed a true gentle heart underneath all the cold feelings from war. It's like he was apathetic so he could do his missions properly, and blames his emotions for killing them and thus tried to kill off the emotions to prevent it ever happening again.
Your story does show these sides of them, and bringing them out in the fashion you are, only makes the story better.
I also love how you write Makoto. She is strong, protective with her own insecurites, beautiful, loving and homey yet not and that is very true to her character from the anime and manga, you bring it in to your story with different situations and circumstances here and there and that's the beauty of fanfiction c: I love how well you write everyone.
| Realms of Destiny 5/10/12 . chapter 21
I had to slap myself to make sure i wasnt imagining an update of this story in my mail! Wow...just wow. My words cant explain your beautiful, indepth writing. I loved how you focused on the bro/sis bonds in this chapter. Loved mako and heero and the ami and quatre scene wad so heartwarming. Hope to see trowa and michiru in the next chapter!
| l-annethunder 5/10/12 . chapter 21
That was awesome. It's nice to see Mako-chan and Ami making progress, intentional or not. As for Setsuna & Duo it's nice to see them interact. You can see why he's good for her AND Taru-chan, they need someone who can make them smile, as both have such heavy burdens to carry. I can't say enough good things about this one so I'm going to shut-up now. Looking forward to your next update kudos and das woot!
| MegaKat 5/10/12 . chapter 21
Argh! Update, woman! And can we make with the smootchie smootchies soon? Ahem... especially Wufei and Ami. Don't know why I like that couple so much, I've never been a huge W/A other than in my own fic. I'll take ANY kissing at this point, though, lol. :D Great chapter!
| MegaKat 5/9/12 . chapter 7
*DIES* Omg, not only the bad gay-bestiality porn line, but Duo popping his hand in the air, yelling, "I WANT IT!" Woke the kids up again... think it's time i hit the hay.
| MegaKat 5/9/12 . chapter 4
OMFG. Seriously, Topaz, I haven't laughed THIS fucking hard in years! I woke the kids up! I could totally see the boys, all bare assed naked, chasing the girls like they were in some hentai flick gone HORRIBLY wrong! THANK YOU for making me laugh, this chapter was AWESOME!
| JPandS 5/9/12 . chapter 21
That, was a great update!
Firstly, can I just say that I simply adore Duo as Setsuna's brother! Its just baffling how great a set of siblings these guys are. They balance off each other so well! And Makoto and Heero! I was so happy to see the memories starting to come back to Makoto and I am such a heap of warm and fuzzies because their relationship with each other is so adorable. Plus, Makoto's playfulness with him about Rei was hilarious ;) Those two also make a great pair of siblings. Actually, all the siblings are awesome with each other.
Ami and Quatre's scene is probably my most favorite of this chapter. It is so interesting to see these two together as siblings since they are so alike. They are also both very sweet of which I have a super soft spot for. But, geez I was so depressed when Quatre was telling Ami about how he had killed himself. It is certainly in his character to do something like that and especially with the reasons given, I was just heart broken as can only happen when dear, precious Quatre is involved!
Nevertheless, it was extremely comforting to have Ami so strong and reminding him that she was there fpr him even when being overcome by memories. I loved that ending.
Lastly, Haruka and Michiru are here! I cannot wait until they get inside! There's sure to be many interesting findings when that happens ;)
Alas, I am once more pressed for time and though I'd like to point out every single aspect of this update that I love, I can't because there are just too many XD Let it suffice to say that I love this chapter completely and I cannot wait to read more!
| JPandS 4/24/12 . chapter 20
Ami/Wufei! My goodness it doesn't get better than that! I seriously am in love with you and this story simply because I was pleasantly surprised that these two are featured in this fic! I love them together and have scoured this site for fics with them and have only managed to find about 2 or 3 so you can imagine how extremely enthralled I am that they are an item here! Thank you so much! This has seriously made my day! I loved their scene together in this last chapter and couldn't help but squeal with excitement Awesome job!
I would comment more but I'm pressed for time. Rest assured, I will be back! lol But briefly, I love the relations they have to each other and the slow discovery / rediscovery of the connections is so thrilling not to mention the humor and the romance! Anyhow, i love it! Thanks for writing such an amazing story! Bye for now and I hope you continue soon!
| Unnamed 2/24/12 . chapter 20
I have to say I really like your fic, mostly probably because of the Ami/Wufei pairing. It's rare, but for some reason I can't help but love it. Anyhow, I'm interested in seeing how everything will turn out, so could you please update again soon?
| nequam-tenshi 10/9/11 . chapter 20
Soon everythng will be right with thir lives.
It seems Michiru is just sitting on the sidelines for these last three chapters.