And this is just a one shot?! That's almost painful!

love it!

I love it! heck I like just about anythin you've written and all I can hope is that you keep writting D

i bet she'd win even the next part of the game (if this story were to continue). the build up of the tension was excellent.

good as always and very creative, wish there were one more chapter.

Aw you have to continue this when you've got time. Love it!

I read a couple other reviews before reviewing.. I don't think I've done that before. I couldn't tell if this is done yet. I do know I don't want it to be. I'd love to see what happens next.. how does Sarah respond.. where do they go from there.. Jareth and Sarah's relationship is just so intriguing. I love how you have him depicted here.. it is SO him-even the car- just perfect. Thanks so much! Clare

Great One Shot. Or will it maybe become more than that? D I love how you can take one drawing and put a story to it. Of course Sarah is always the odd one. But that's what makes her cool. I doubt Jareth would be attracted to her if she was just like every other girl. I thought it was funny how Sarah was freaking out in the ice cream parlor and Jareth sat there like if nothing was wrong and nothing interested him. I think that's what was making Sarah panic. I think I would've felt as if I were going crazy too.

So when Jareth stopped her in the park did she freeze of her own will or did Jareth stop time? I like how it's a game to him and I guess it's not over yet.

As always I enjoyed reading anything written by you.

Until next time.

A.P.

wow that was interesting. hm that was a hot image of jareth... hehehe

Aw...you can't leave this as a one-shot...it has such potential. I love it when he toys with her like a cat with a mouse...and I like it when he's a controlling, arrogant, misogynist. He is so appealing when he's an unmitigated bastard. Speaking of which...

So...when is your "Hurts Like Hell" muse coming back? :-)

The imagery the car and jareth current look are entrancing to say the least can't wait to see what happens next. and the whisper... cliffie if I ever read one leave you wanting more

I am intrigued...may I have a tiny taste more?

yeah!

new story new story new story!

i was so happy to come home form my art history class and see you had begun a new story! its good and i know it will be great before its over with!

MP

I am writing this as I read the thing... hhehee.

here we go...

MARYSUE... hehehehe... I love it. She gets her own role.

ok ok, so I didn't stop and make a comment every sentence or two, but I am loving this, and you CAN'T possibly keep this a ONE SHOT!

oh goodie another story, it never fails to amaze me paisley how you finish one story and go straight to another. I'm liking this one it appears to be a dark Jareth one so far... call me strange but I like Dark Jareth. it is ever so more compelling