WOW, i really like your story, especially at the end hehehe...anyways, please write more! It's a VERY impressive chapter, 'specially for the first.

That is an awsome story so far! Continue please!

OMFG THIS STORY ROX MAH SOX! ^^ U HAVE TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER, U JUST GOT TO! Plz write the next chapter! This story really is gr8, dood!

omg omg omg omg omg omg omg... CONTINUTE! PLEASE!! IT'S SO FRIKIN AWESOME!

cool I love it and the 'was it something I said' after Amu fainted made me laugh so original but a classic gr8 job plz update soon 8D

please, pretty pretty please continue this. it's well written :D and hilarious too -laugh at Ran at the end-

~nya~! continue it continue it! it's really good!! plus i love the end of the chapter...made me crack up laughing haha

OMG THIS IS TO GOOD! PLZ wirte more!

update please!if u dont update ill be sad!TT

Keep going!

..-opens mouth-...-closes mouth-...I'm completely awestruck by this. I've gotta say this is so far my favorite Shugo Chara fanfic. And this is only the first chapter. -eyes glaze over in happiness-
-5 minutes later-
Huh? Oh, right. I hope to God this is an Amuto. -crosses every finger that CAN be crossed- Are you including Dia and the others in this? ...Sorry, but I ADORE Dia. And Miki. -nervous laughter-
I hope this is updated soon, but take your time. I'll wait. Not longer than a year and a half, though. That's a bit much.
I love the plotline for this. XD BYE!
Hope to see another chapter!

Sugoi!I"m amazed that you got over 12,0 words done! As expected of WoM-sensei! ^ ^I'll try to make mine just as long as weel, that is if I get the potential going...Anyways, I congradulate you! Can't wait to see more! :)

haha! So Kawaii! Please keep writing THIS STORY! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! IT'S FANTASTIC!

Amazing Start
Is Ikuto going to show up more now?
In the end, I hope the pairing will be Amu & Ikuto, but thats just my opinion.

I was a bit ah biased about reading this I guess but it's really good. I love how your first chapter is really long and detailed. Also, since you aren't one of those authors that write without checking their grammar; it's definitely a plus. The beginning is much like that of the anime but uhm you're not planning on following that outline are you or are you planning a plot of your own? But since this is based on the 1800s, I really can't imagine Amu or any of the Guardians transforming into their kiddy selves. That's a bit of a problem for me so can you somehow describe how they'll look? I mean, it is a bit odd. Nonetheless, I hope you update soon! I really enjoyed reading this and hope you keep going consistently.