spanking~! ya gotta luv it~! thank you~! that was great~!

Cole xoxo

Ohh wow, that was a really, really close call!! Poor Alphonse, never knowing the truth!! Will you post another chapter here when Edward comes back? Hehehe. Maybe Mustang will spank him, too, for taking so long and making them all worry. Then Alphonse will be shocked!

You're doing well with the English! Keep it up no matter what. If it's possible for you to download an English Spell-checking computer software program, I'm sure it will help you.

that was good glad he got there to stop him in time. nice fic.

that was great!
i dont speak english perfectly,but i can see that youre fron france.
It was really cool,congratulations.

This was quite a good fic. I'm guessing English isn't your first language?? I think this could use a bit of help grammar/spelling wise, but overall, I think you did pretty well. If you need any help or pointers, feel free to give me a call.