I was literally cracking up when Gazzy started singing and chasing Fang! It was so funny! :) I loved it!

That was hilarious

Ahhahahahahahahah. Nice. That was good... loved it!

Sorry if I seem a little slap-happy-ish-nish... it's... 5:38 am here... and I've been up all night! And I'm drinking MOUNTAIN DEW!!

MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Hi.

keep writing,
Italy

oh my gawd this was highlarious! i loved it! :-)

OMG I LOVED IT! GREAT JOB! I laughed SO HARD during Gazzy's song!

And whats hilarious is that the MOMENT i finished reading the "Shake It" section, that song turned on on my iPod! Good job! XD

LOL!

Lol. Ditto on Miley Cyrus

I loved it! and I love shake it, and nine in the afternoon, but hate miley cyrus(Die! miley die!)

You made Max A fool!how could u

that was a hilarious and great story absolutely loved it

Just the end of the world! Back to the street were we began, feelin' as good as lovers...
I love that song. But not any of the others in this hilarious story of awesomeness.

hahahahaah i loved the end

america rox. miley sucks. fax iz kewl. austrialia rox (me & my family may be moving ther 2 get away from Obama -jk-)

Oh. My. Gosh. I had to stop reading this in the middle because I was laughing so hard and I was in a public library. Not to mention you have a line from 9 in the Afternoon in there, which is my favorite song EVER! Keep up the good (not to mention hilarious) work!

Hahahahahahahaha!